Reviews for Broken Promises
shailah344 chapter 13 . 9/5
cn you continue the fanfiction?
it truly amazing
Justmereally chapter 13 . 7/5
Love this so far, do you have time to write again?
I’d definitely read! ;)
NightFyl chapter 1 . 5/27
This is one of the first if not the first fix that actually takes into account the fact that Tartarus has already been described
haneeyaimranmughal chapter 13 . 2/27
Please continue this story! It’s amazing!
Random Egg Guest chapter 13 . 12/27/2019
Oh hi I read all the way to chapter 13 before realizing that it doesn't continue.
This was a very very emotional story for me because it actually answers the question 'what if Percy had stayed behind?' better than most fics.
I don't know what's going on in your life right now, heck I don't even know you, but something must definitely be happening if you couldn't finish this story. I want you to know that you'll get through it (if it's something bad... IDK I'm terrible at this motivational speaking stuff) and you can always talk to us with your announcements on a chapter.
I wouldn't hold it against you if you decided to end this fix, but I am quite sure that there are hundreds of readers wanting to know what happens next. I would not hold it against you if you dont want to do it... But I would totally appreciate it if you did~some random pjo fan in nigeria
Your boi unknown chapter 13 . 12/23/2019
Actually finish this dude I posted like a couple months ago but this is good
Jkoo7 chapter 13 . 12/6/2019
Sometimes authors make their characters so overpowered, it's hard to like their stories, but you do such an amazing job with planning everything out, I feel awed by every chapter.
I hope your having a wonderful Christmas, and I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
Smiling all the way,
Jkoo7.
Guest chapter 13 . 12/3/2019
Hey man I never ever review books but your fanfic is probably my fav HOO fanfic on this sight please finish this fanfic. I always wanted a story about the battle between the greeks and romans. Also thank you for not making Percy overpowered and make everyone worship him or something. -million
Jeremy Yusufov chapter 13 . 11/23/2019
pls update
Guest chapter 13 . 2/26/2019
Nice! Awesome story!
Guest chapter 13 . 2/24/2019
I loved the story line and it would be awesome if you continued!
Guest chapter 13 . 2/6/2019
I'm reaaaaly loving this series and I would love it if you would continue with it! Please post the next chapter asap!
Guest chapter 13 . 1/26/2019
please please pleeeeease continue with this. ive been reading some percy jackson fanfic and nothing was close to how good this one is. its almost like it was written by riordan himself. ill be waiting for the next chapter. please dont stop writing. ur one of the few decent fanfic authors out there. if u have an idea for a book of your own, go for it. i would love to read more of your stories. but, there are still a few spelling errors, but no biggie. pls post the next chapter asap. thanks! :) :)
Death Fury chapter 13 . 1/6/2019
Excellent job
ShadowFireHime-Sama chapter 13 . 1/5/2019
when will perc come home?
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