Reviews for Avatar Amelia
Little Liar chapter 7 . 5/31/2018
It could be better.
drakonpie250 chapter 7 . 10/28/2016
This is awesome.
Indecisive Bob chapter 7 . 2/19/2016
Nice chapter! I love how there's definitely a sort of "Fellowship of the Ring" vibe going on at the end of the chapter. And wow, I was not expecting Alexandria to reveal Cauldron like that, but I guess if Amy has already shown knowledge of the Entities, it makes more sense to try and get more people on board to end the threat to humanity. Keep up the good work!
Indecisive Bob chapter 6 . 2/19/2016
Nice chapter! You know, I was really surprised at how civil and rational everyone was for the discussion about the Simurgh. Then Lung decided he was going to taunt the heck out of Eidolon, and I wasn't really surprised anymore. And damn, Carol is still a bitch. Sure, she's got actual issues from childhood that she transferred to Marquis, then transferred to Amy. But still. What a B.
Indecisive Bob chapter 5 . 2/19/2016
Nice chapter. The entire fight with the Simurgh was kind of anticlimactic, but considering the fact that she came to BrocktonBay for the sole purpose of being Spiritually Cleansed by Amy, it's not really unexpected. But wow, your author's note. Much sarcasm.
Indecisive Bob chapter 4 . 2/19/2016
Nice story so far! I'm fairly certain Rai and Sun are from Teen Titans (like, 93% sure), but I'm lost on where the others are from, except for Korra of course.

As for pairings, I'm all for a Dragon/Amy pairing. It could actually work, considering the fact that Dragon is alive enough to possess a Shard and therefore has enough spiritual power for Amy to know that Dragon is alive straight from the get-go. With Amy's growing mastery of biokinesis (life-bending?) and her interest in nanotechnology, it's not out of the realm of possibility for Amy to make a mostly organic body for Dragon to inhabit.
orion0905 chapter 7 . 1/31/2016
This story looks interesting. I was wondering if a had missed a new series of avatar but I'm glad I didn't.
animeflunky chapter 7 . 5/27/2015
This is the happiest progressy chapter I've ever seen in a worm fic, kudos :) Enjoying this story a lot and looking forward to seeing what will happen.
goddragonking chapter 7 . 5/27/2015
great chapter , love the way this story is going, keep up the excellent work! Keep the good writing and hope for more updates soon and Really awesome story, can't wait to read more:)
Sorrow chapter 6 . 4/18/2015
"Lung uses taunt! It's super effective!"

I doubt that is because of Lung rolling a critical as much as it is of Eidolon being himself. You know, has less Social Skills than Armsmaster, less sanity than GU. Just being generally Bug Nuts insane...
Tobi-Douchebag-666 chapter 5 . 4/19/2015
Eidolon really needs therapy now that on top of losing his powers he's already responsible for who knows how many deaths
HellKing666 chapter 6 . 4/18/2015
Alright, so I suppose the talk out with Vicky is going to take an extra chapter.

And we have unrest among the populace, now that they suspect the truth.

Eidolon is going to have a hard life after this.
Tobi-Douchebag-666 chapter 6 . 4/18/2015
You know something I gotta say the last thing Eidolon needed were "worthy opponents", he needed something like therapy at the very least
goddragonking chapter 4 . 4/16/2015
great chapter , love the way this story is going, keep up the excellent work! Keep the good writing and hope for more updates soon and Really awesome story, can't wait to read more:)
dragon and any would be good or Skitter and any would be a good ship
Dagon Draconis chapter 1 . 3/29/2015
This is for chapter 5: Alright, that was much better than the other thing you wrote. No offense. Though I'm a tad bit dubious about how Amy was able to overpower the mind of an Endbringer enough to purify it. I would understand if it had been Leviathan, but the Smurgh is the brains of the first three Endbringers. It just seemed a bit easy for Amy is all. She just popped up a pool full amount of water and splashed the Smurgh with it, and boom, now it's a good. Anyway, overall much better than before, thank you. -DagonDraconis
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