one thing I don't get: why doesn’t Victoria just carry Bella to stalk their prey? wouldn't that be easier than using the car?

I really hate the male bashing from this story to be honest, not just because I'm a guy I would hate it just as much if it was a bunch of gay guys bashing girls. I think it's really stupid and rather rude. But, I'm glad you still wrote Emmett in character and not a dick, plus you didn't have anyone bash him. Emmett was always my favorite male out of the Cullens and his character didn't deserve that. Bash Jacob and Edward all you want though, fine with me! Perhaps if you wanted to write all girls you should've used Life and Death? Wait was that even out when you started this? I have no clue.

My only issue with this so far, is the issue I have with most stories where Victoria gets to close to Bella. Alice would've seen and at the very least she would've come check on Bella. I know it has to be ignored for some stories but it's still a plot hole that bothers me.

I can’t express how amazing this was. Thank you

7 chapters in and I l’m over here re-evaluating my life like...maybe it’s me. Am I...do I...WHY do I enjoy this TOO much...am I a masochist? Then I remember I am terrified of spiders, run from horse flies and would probably have a panic attack trying to watch a human be killed. If this situation were real I would die...because I would be terrified. I admire the stoicism in Bella though because if it were me I would have ATE the bullet...no hesitation. Which coincidentally is not stopping me from enjoying this fic. So I guess I’m saying great job to the author.

One of the BEST chapters I've EVER read in my fucking life, in my native language people as gifted as you are called ''capo'' so yeah you're a total capo, señorita. Thank you for sharing this chapter!

Such a hot chapter! Wow, I'm just as speechless as Victoria lol

One of your best chapters,indeed, I love how confident you are when you write something so disturbing but at the same time so amazingly good. Thank you so much for sharing

Amazing fanfiction,you had me on the summary, thank you for uploading this amazing story, I wanna thank you too for another of your stories ''Alice'' Since is quite good and I love the way you write

Maybe I'm just sick but both strap on scenes actually helped the chapter. Love reading Victoria as blood thirsty sex mad vampire.

No such thing as overboard I absolutely loved it. Usually I read or write Harry Potter fanfic with Granger/one of the Black sisters but I am really enjoying your story, much better than the original when Bella was with Edward (can't stand the man).

Only a talented writer can make rape and violence seem erotic and seductive. Not gonna lie, I did find the hardcore sex scenes very repetitive after a while - but Bella's descent into corruption and depravity was fascinating and painful at the same time. I loved seeing her relationship with Victoria develop, so twisted yet touching at the same time.

My favourite chapter was the transformation chapter - I really liked your take on the whole process and I think it was written beautifully.

So basically this fic is a perfect example of Stockholm syndrome which then developes into Bella becoming 1 half of a fucked up psychopathic duo much like some serial killer couples in the real world. Dont get me wrong it's well written and clearly the authors a talented writer but the content is to messed up for me personally. I abhor rape and there can never be a good reason for it. Anyway apart from the nasty shit, your a pretty decent writer.

Lol that was successful

Awww my Vicbella babies literally bonding and I love it 333