Probably not good odds on a chapter 11, I suppose.

A short chapter, and we get to see the Thalmor, not my favourite of organisations but I am interested to see how that changes things

This was an interesting chapter, I didn't expect his father to be there, is it actually him or some creation of Coryphaeus's like the dragon, this is going to make Dar'Thedar's job much harder with the enemy having a Dragon Born on his side, the next chapter is going to be interesting.

can I have your autograph

Wow, here we have Dar'Thedar closing the breech, and now Corypheus has arrived but he isn't alone, who else has arrived? Lord Harkin or maybe Miraak. I don't know, can't wait for the next chapter

Wait wait. Was the bowel thing a PREQUEL refrance! (Read the story if you having already it's awsome, prequel adventure. Set in elder scrolls and kinda simler to you characters.) I must spread PREQUEL everywhere! Anyways my comments now range in the threes. Yeaaah I guess. Anyways love your stories and I'll be keeping a eye on you... That sounds/looks much creepier then I meant it to! Anyways you do a lot of khajiit crossover (or at least two) so please do more as I love how people react to them!

Well holy shit! I just got done reviewing sabriz's story! "Air pumps" fuck yeah! I'm on a roll, giving receives to a underrated author. MORE STORIES! Please.

A fun little chapter, it was sweet, have a happy holiday

A short but sweet chapter, liked the song that was sung, Dar'Thedar is going to have to be careful Bull and Solas are slowly figuring him out about his harsher side, I did like what he said to Cassandra about treating the mages like slaves, though I can see them coming to blows if they aren't carful. Looking forward to the next chapter

I demand more cause its so awesome

Ok so I wanted to read a little fan fiction while screens loaded on Dragon Age:Inquisitin and I found this...I literally stopped playing just to read it, a good story this is and a good author.

Great new update i can't wait for another. I really like how you are doing character interactions and such.

But i have something i would like to tell you. I have come across something i realized you could integrate into your story to give an explanation or make some sense of the situation if you haven't fully plotted your story's world setting yet. Shadow magic threads/elder-scrolls-feats-and-sources-thread-cosmology-as-well.290113/#post-13650011 (part 14 On the Parallel worlds that exist-The ability of the gods and users of shadow magic to travel and manipulate them) It deals with alternate worlds that exist as parallel but often widely different versions of nirn. Shadow magic allows viewing of these lands and travel to and through them and interacting between the alternate versions of objects and people.

Good chapter

Cassandra could have been a little more...tactful. calling a khajiit a animal, especially with how the dunmer treated them when they were used as slaves, not the smartest idea

oh la la threesome with ironbull with Cullen yummy. Sry I'm on a chocolate high.

good chapter, gray beards sound like dicks to me...