Reviews for Blank Card - Hiatus |
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Dab chapter 8 . 4/8 Blank Card - Hiatus? More like Blank Card - Dropped! *dabs* |
Dead chapter 8 . 3/1 Dead fic |
Mangareader13 chapter 1 . 1/11 A pity he cannot remember them... that will cause a lot of pain once they find him. |
PieKnight chapter 8 . 7/19/2019 Really liking this story and how you're crossover all the parts of the Megami Tensei universe. Hopefully you pick up the story again someday! |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/17/2019 Do we really have to wait long for such a subpar fic? |
Nicodimalaj chapter 8 . 8/30/2018 Great chapter ( even if it is an introduction) ill wait for the next one |
Hunter of Entities chapter 8 . 7/1/2018 They don't even know that SEES is there... If there is an encounter there is sure to be an intense fight... Also was that the axiom making an appearance? I love that Alice is a thing but I hate that the shadow hunters and demon contractors are able to keep tabs on Minato from so far away. Also wondering what happened to Minato's weapons from tartarus. |
Yuuki Itsuka chapter 8 . 6/10/2018 There are info dumps and there are this. The Shadow Whatevers' description was so long and dragged on it nearly making me fall asleep out of boredom. If somethings can be said in shorter sentences then let the sentence be short. Secondly, you're taking the harem shenanigans way too far. That also felt like a waste of time and words. It failed to establish anything other than Minato is a harem protag...which was established in the previous chapters. This chapter was a complete waste of my time and the plot didn't go anywhere. |
TLDR chapter 8 . 6/9/2018 Holy shit. Those guy's description were so long it was physically painful to read |
fallendemon248 chapter 8 . 6/8/2018 Wow I didn’t think you would update again so quick |
ZeroDaze chapter 7 . 5/25/2018 Oh boi... This is gonna be fun... |
Yuuki Itsuka chapter 7 . 5/19/2018 Okay... what the heck? Belial and Nebiros treating Alice like trash? Yeah, just no. They kill people to give her friends. Also, why did they die pathetically? They are high ranking demons of hell and they would've fought to the very end. Begging for their lives and running away? Again, just no. |
Cpt.Spark chapter 7 . 4/23/2018 Pleasantly surprised this was updated. Hope the wait isn't as long for next time |
Ruberforumfree chapter 7 . 4/19/2018 XD that ending killed me lol, are you going to write a Lemon? I would like to read one for this story, even if it with Alice. |
Darkkon27 chapter 7 . 4/17/2018 My lord I was chuckling at the end, looking forward to more of this! |