So I'm guessing this is dead. It's been what a little over 3 years since the last update. Real shame I was rather enjoying this.

Am sorry I’m not usually one to nic pick but why is ruby always getting ass handed to her it like your making her weakest of the bunch I know it’s your story but still she was still the leader of team ruby but you have like she can’t take a punch or something I mean she still has here aura which is meant to protect her and you have that she gets a broken nose from being punched in the face once, for god sakes yangs her sister so she knows how to take a punch

hell no

Update? (If you want to)

Okay, I am not trying to ruin it, but hear me out. Send hate PMs all you want your opinions are heard min should be too. Remember Fox Alistar? Part of team CFVY? He has no pupils. Yet he can see fine. I'm not sure you, the author, wanted to take that route, but just a quick mention. Sorry for ruining it.

Did you try to spell tiring or did you not make a mistake? No nitpick, just a qweho.

So, let me get this straight. Seeing as Weiss and Ruby married, Weiss wanted to get rid of the Shnee name and took on the Rose name and even changed the company name to Rose Dust Company. Seeing as her mother, (or in your story at least since it was her father that hated faunus, or I just was never that attentive to Weiss' background), didn't like that, the fact that her daughter was lesbian or that she changed the name out of shame, or even both, she decided to try and kill Ruby. Actually kill all of team RWBY except for Weiss for obvious reasons, to try and rid Weiss of changing the name. But whatever happened or is still happened she showed down the hateful advances, but they left Ruby half blind, Weiss something, Yang filled with holes, and Blake's newly grown tail kinked. That's some helluva backstory of your story dude. Unless this is another one of your stories I haven't read yet.

Wow! I like this story! I have just finished the whole thing to this point and I am already missing any new updates! Yes I know it's hard to miss something that is not ready yet but I am and I am a really strange kind of logic! This is just a fantastic ride and I am so glad that I found it! Now I have another story to wait on with bated breath! Please hurry (At your pleasure of course) because I am getting sore sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for the next bit of adventure and mystery and excitement!

Hhhhheeeyyyyyy there... I just started reading your work so I don't know your style...do u plan on updating this story? It kinda sucks being so invested in it just to end on a cliffhanger

Plz update soon

Ominisity intensifies.

To bad she's not a bat fannus... bazing...
Ok im sorry

oh come on! that's it! please update

I don't usually review in the middle of stories, especially dead ones, but Weiss trying to fix Ruby's scar made my day.

I love this story, I hope you update it soon. I was just thinking that since Anna is blind Yang & Blake are most likely worried about her future when she grows up. You could probably have them bring this up in a conversation with Coco & Velvet, to which Coco & Velvet reply "you two know that Fox is blind right?" & just end it right there.