I loved it! Great job, I really liked the thought of Belle being able to communicate with the valar.

A bit rushed but nice

Oh Good Lord! This is shaping up to be a fabulous story!
I'm so excited to read the rest! Thank you for all your creativity and hard work thus far!

Nice.

I love how she destroyed the Arkenstone. I'm happy that they all survived.

I liked it very much

This story is pretty interesting, originally I got drawn in by the picture, I was completely mesmerized-did you draw it?

hello,

thank you for this story.
all the best

This was really good keep it up

Loved it

I like it!

I like it.

Glad there was a happy ending! When she begged the Valar to not let Thorin die, I thought the price would be losing something more than just energy for a few days. I'm glad this was a happy ending, but Hobbits have large families...granted Belladonna wasn't able too, but Took are notorious for LARGE families...4 children is a lot by Dwarf general standards...but not by Hobbits...I guess it's a neat compromise though.

Well it's definitely different from the bejeweled but I'm wondering how you're going to go about making it even more different. I am wondering and I'm having hunch that her guests are going to come in handy even more so.

Update soon and take care.

Please update soon I'm totally enjoying this version of the story. Take care