| Reviews for The Second Avatar: Air |
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   Fenris Jin chapter 1 . 5/22 Nice take on Avatar Zuko! I'm actually glad he didn't join the GAang so easily. Although I wish he was Blue Spiriting his way across the Earth Kingdom or meeting with the 41st while he was away. Would have been fun shenanigans. I was hopeful for canon pairings but Toko is nice too. It's just their bromance is more fun. XD For the dream learning, I think it's not so bad. He's technically the secret weapon right? And he's not going to reincarnate like the regulat Avatar, he needs all the aces. Limiting it to Aang's experiences adds to the dimension of it, I think. The current orginal Avatar needs to do it first before it can be downloaded to his database, so to speak. |
| VickyPrimal chapter 5 . 4/15 Please update this is so gooooddddd |
| 9tailedcatfox chapter 1 . 4/5 ZUKO X TOPH TOKO It would be highly appreciated if you had this as the ship. |
| Darklightningstorm chapter 5 . 2/21 Also, this story is kind of wonderful so far. |
| Darklightningstorm chapter 5 . 2/21 If Zuko's not going to travel with Aang and the others, then I agree. Learning in his dreams is an acceptable way to get airbending out of the way. |
| Guest chapter 5 . 12/15/2019 I like the story it is very interesting |
| God-of-Machines chapter 5 . 4/8/2019 I like it, I think it's interesting. |
| Jackfrost0619 chapter 5 . 3/11/2019 update please this is so good |
| Primus2021 chapter 2 . 10/17/2018 my last R&R was meant to end with Ty Lee x Teo. |
| Rain of the Forest chapter 5 . 10/3/2018 I really want to see more of this! |
| blades chapter 5 . 8/21/2018 Man... I wish you had continued with this. Assuming three years means your not going to continue with it that is. I am just going to comment because I want to. You know Zuko is good with being sneaky I can see him tricking people into thinking he is a water bender and then later an earth bender later. Zuko's uncle may be a good general and teacher; he was not the teacher that Zuko needed in the original series. I realize he was trying to curb some of Zuko's more reckless behavior, but I think he went about it the wrong way and instead made Zuko more frustrated than anything. |
| dsvuoewh chapter 5 . 5/24/2018 upset that this is discontinued but what can you do. interesting idea. if zuko doesnt show up long after they have left, i can imagine how interesting the meeting up would be |
| Guest chapter 5 . 2/8/2018 Why is it that all the good fanfiction stories are never completed?! This is a great story, why hasn't there been an update in more than 2 years?! |
| Ylterces A chapter 5 . 1/27/2018 I really like it so far. I really like your reason for why he has two swords, I'd never thought about it that way before. Anyway please update soon. |
| ZaneT69 chapter 5 . 1/1/2018 I love this story. Please update it, or at least announce whether it will continue. |
