Dude, write a story already!

I sent an OC awhile ago. Why is it not showing up?

Really well written, i hope to see more soon!
Here is a possible candidate for the Vault:
Name: Holly
Species/gender: human, female
Class: hunter, prefer Blade Dancer subclass but doesn't mind going Gunslinger
Apparence:
-phisical
A woman around her late twentyes/early thirtyes.
Short messy fair hair, grey eyes, pale skin; has painted her face with a blue cross shaped mark.
Tall, around 6 feet, feminine yet atletic body structure.
-Armour
Head: jacknife 3.2
Guantlets:jacknife 2.1
Chest: crest of alpha lupi
Legs: gravebreaker 1.3
Cloak: strenght of the pack
Weapons:
primary: payback SOS auto rifle
special: PLUG ONE .1 fusion rifle
heavy: gjallarhorn rocket louncher
Extra stuff:
Personality: has a motherly nature, very patient and sweet. Prefers to think before acting but won't hold back when her friends are in danger
Backstory:
Revived by Sparks, her ghost, on Venus. She was a chemist engeneer near the Ishstar university. She, along with her daughter and co-workers, were killed by the Kell of Winter.

Name: Havoc Stormfist
Subclass: Striker

Sorry I forgot that

Name: Havoc Stormfist
Race: Exo
Gender: male
Class: Titan
Primary weapon: auto rifle
Armor: legendary fist and leg; Mark of the Six Fronts
Color: Orange and blue
Backstory: none; built for war; monotone; cold "hearted"

I would also love it if you would later in your story make me dramatically die.

I am an Titan Exo male and my name is Hawley but I prefer Havoc. I have an auto rifle and although I suck at this game I love it so I would like if later in the story you would make me dramatically die. I also have the Mark of the Six Fronts and orange and blue armor (and legendary fist and leg armor).

Vince
awoken
male
hunter gunslinger
messy purple hair very blue skin
the cloak of dredgen yor the crest of alpha lupi and grave breaker rest
thorn to match the cloak
you should make him very confident and having the skill to match it but also completely unable to walk away from a fight, you could have that be a problem when they get to the gorgons
he was an awoken from the reef who died on a queen ordered scouting mission and when revived by a ghost was banished for being a guardian

Name: Keck Andren
Species: Human
Gender: Male
Class: Hunter Subclass: Gunslinger
Appearance: Wiry, Lean Armor: Green and Gray
Primary: Scout Rifle
Personality: Lonely, Guarded
Backstory: His parents were killed by Vex and he has held a grudge ever since. He was raised in the Tower, since his parents were Guardians, so he was trained at a young age. He took the role because he wanted to get back at the Vex, but he has trouble working with others. He lost a hand in a childhood accident so he has a robotic hand, which can be a problem sometimes. Hope this is enough!

Name: Venta Stark
Species : Human
Gender: Male

Class & Subclass: Hunter. Gunslinger

Appearance (both physical and armour): Bleached Blonde Hair, Fair appearance with a scar from temple to neck Tatoo of Rikis the devil archons face on his shoulder
Tall yet muscular build with ring finger missing on left hand from having a hand cannon ripped out of his hand while fighting of fallen on earth.
arnour
head: exodus helmet
Arms: spine of ahamkara
Chest: ghost angel
legs: Exodus greaves
class item: ghost angel cloak

Preferred Primary weapon class: scout rifle mida multi tool or b line trauma
secondary LdR 5001
heavy: steel oracle z-11

Extra stuff (Personality, backstory etc.): revived by ghost on the forgotten shore and was attacked by riksis the devil arkon while patrolling the cosmodrome and survived to tell the tale and provided valuable evidence on appearnce and weaknesses
disappeared for 3 months while undertaking a scouting mission to try and find a pathway to the jovian systems (jupiter, saturn etc) one of the few gaurdians to survive the disaster on the moon. Known for acting before thinking but being extremely skilled in stealth and reconassance. Often goes from extreme long distance kills to dangerously close quarters with enemies much larger than himself.
rarely speaks
If you need anything else just pm me Id love to help write this if you ever get stuck or anything like that :)

Great story so far, I've subbed to the story.

Since I can't send this in a PM;

Thaddeus Bane

Human

Male

Titan, well rounded

Late twenties/early thirties. Weathered but somewhat youthful appearance. Armor is a Fallen/hive hybrid setup.

Scout Marksman but deep down only trusts his "Last Man Standing" HC.

Thaddeus was born and raised in what was called Texas in the golden age. He was found and resurrected by his ghost in the foothills of the Rocky Mountains. His journey to the last city was side tracked when he was captured by a vandal squad on patrol somewhere around Minnesota. Several years of torture followed before Thaddeus was able to make his escape, killing his captors in the process. He arrives at the tower in his well worn armor sporting an almost light less ghost and his death not far behind.