Wow! Great story! Thanks for sharing!

I love this! I don't know how I missed it. I just wish there was more!

Muy buena historia,me gusto mucho.
Gracias por escribir tan linda historia.
Saludos

If they fired her for Edward Taking pictures of her she could sue them for that. His board is not to smart. I would tell them to shove there job and find another one. So Bella will get no bonuses or raise some because she is going out with Edward wow I Bella like not advancing in her job.

Yeah she the best but does not get a raise his board sucks.

I don't think mice are cute I would be very offended lol. 20 year age difference is a little off to me but love is love no matter age or gender as long as there happy. I have a hard time with people waiting this long to have children you better be is excellent physical and mental shape. I am in my 40's and could not even think of barley starting having kids. I love my grandchildren but that is different from just starting with my own kids.

Jasper really he surprised at where she lives. 10 dollars an hour is not shit. Of course a rich jerk would look Down on where Bella lives but they sure want to pay you nothing while looking down on you. I would kick there asses for locking me up like that.

Well I think if someone works hard then no matter how long they have been with a company they should get a raise. Unfortunately it does not work that way.

Aw loved it!

I think Bella should of got the raise if you do good work you deserve it. Edward is a jerk

"women are twisted bitches"? that sounds pretty misogynistic

Love It!

I loved this story it is really good. Thank you

Thanks for sharing.

This is in no way a complaint or an insult but I'm curious as to why the majority of the stories you all write has Edward years, sometimes decades, older than Bella? How about some variation? Just my opinion.