I totally agree with you, I have the same opinion on that thing. I think Naruto's development was an ETERNAL BIG SHIT, when we know the reasons behind this hellish descent, we are very desappointed, I don't like, I don't hate Hinata but
she's so put without objective as and when Naruto. Basically, she wanted to be recognized by her clan but after one has the impression that she was just created to admire Naruto and never take his own steps, I find it as silly as Sakura who ends up with Sasuke. Some characters had ambitions or dreams and pouffe! Little by little, in order to get to the end of the war at the end, they disappear like that!

It adds one more thing making me hate NaruHina and SasuSaku.

I prefer NaruSaku and maybe SasuKarin

I agree with everything you said.

Continuation? Story was really good. Wish you had made that ONE more chapter.

Your story How Naruto should have finished even though You acknowledged the chapter 693 You tried to find a way to make NaruSaku more realist and I guess for the 2 years after will be how Sakura shows Naruto that She loves him. Waiting for the epilogue

Honestly, this chapter was shit. I don't know why anyone thinks having Naruto repeatedly tell Sakura she doesn't know what she's feeling is fun to read. It's not good writing and it's out of character.

Look I do understand your grievance but when nothing's last movie came out it was not Masashi Kishimoto who wrote the story but it was the company he works for during the fourth Shinobi War the company started working on Naruto movie last movie member he himself said he's never Hands-On with any project that he writes so he wasn't there when he started writing articles last movie behind his back so when he would turn it to get a view of the story he said hey hey we have the movie now we're going to add the movie you're going to make the animator up with the movie we will otherwise you're going to lose the money that you made on all the animes will put the money away from you before the stipulation a contract that night anyway if we kind of made me count them as anything the road but they did none of those movies he lose the money he made them on the entire Naruto series with them it was a stipulation in his contract so he was forced to write the ending that best suits it even now he is forced to go along with the charade and that is why now the last movie is fanfiction and not Cannon and his fruitcake fans already know that do you know what the word fanatic means orfan someone who's all right some of these fans of the novels last movie how to put it a true fanatics and I found that I live in a independent group home people with mental illness become Fanatics 2 or delusions when did delusion is propagated by an actual company says ok what you would you believe actually happen even though fans of the original show it did not I've been told people who are these two players become socially violent or also mentally unbalanced from the delusions being fed so like I said when dealing crazy people smile and Nod your head you and I both know how that goes for Shinobi war was supposed to end with Hinata. marry within the hyuga clan. Yes I know it's kind of gross I understand that but that's what it was they may not have seen the enemy but that's what happens on top of that she promised that she should unite both branch and main house that is the only way to do it but just so you know you do not have to accept Naruto last movie As Canon you can accepted as alternate timeline that's exactly what it is the rabbit goddess Broke Free and created the timeline that did not I have an idea for a story to stick it in the air those fruitcakes as soon as I get my account setup I'll send you a p.m. with my suggestion thank you for the story and please stay true to the anime no Shikamaru and Temari a while back on another Wikipedia I know it's hypocritical I read before the novel's last movie came out that she'd been asked out by fellow said Ninja that she had gone then it's an academy would have been dangerous and he was afraid to ask you out cuz her brother gaar my sincerest apology if I misspelled his name but during the fourth Shinobi War the young man and asked about and she said yes I read it on Naruto on Wikipedia I know you have to say that's hypocritical who is the fanbase site that's altered by the fans but I read it on there because it was on there and set up by the fans that means it was it was done in the anime but the fans will tell you the fill-in don't count when the fill-incount of the Naruto the last movie story and even if they don't count the anime Naruto and Naruto Shippuden doesn't prove that should have been done either but this crackpot fans no matter how much you want to prove it they won't listen because you're delusional being fed with a saying OK officially the same as Canon when the true fans of the anime Naruto no it's not but people who are mentally unbalanced tend to become violent when you break their delusions I live in independent housing and and Liam and the mass mental health system in the east coast for a very long time and I've seen it first-hand when people have the delusion book and attend to become violent so it's best to smile and Nod your head these fruitcakes cuz you and I both know that this last movie is fanfiction and non-canon Justice ticket to outlet just say it's an alternate timeline I'm sorry if any words are misspelled but I'm using my Android phone phone app voice to text and phone starting to heat up

your characterisation of naruto is a bit off - hes blindly trusting sasuke and is obsessively defending him whenever someone throws insults at him. i think canon naruto was more circumspect of the reactions sasuke would get and he understood that sasuke committed serious crimes that deserve punishment. also the conversation/confession between naruto & sakura is confusing and going too back and forth

Good take on the ending, but really you should drop the '-ttebayo' from Naruto's speech, it's kind of annoying, and in the most recent manga translations he doesn't say it that often. And maybe find another word to refer to Sakura that's not to do with her hair color? Surely there's much more interesting features about her. There's only so many times you can use the word 'pinkette' before it gets old.

It was a beautiful chapter

Really good storytelling

This will the great chapter

This was a good chapter

I take it back this is nothing more than a glorious fanfic it's nothing to do with Naruto last movie shame on you for trying to justify what you just wrote

When these idiots of the Sasuke and Sakura and Hinata & Naruto I'm looking for some material how to deal with these idiots hear something I copy from a fanfic cite quotes why Naruto & Hinata never be together but Shikamaru I disagree with who he would end up with I know he end up with but I can't spell her name do you know the civilian woman who won she is a scientist and the Hidden Leaf Village I can't pronunciate her name unfortunately I see her being with him more than anything else but I believe he wanted to have a normal civilian wife in quote but just so you know that's why I believe he would turn it up with I'm sorry we complete the story ever been nice to actually correct that but if people ask I'll tell them this is the true naruto last story or since it's not a movie ShikaTema sorry lost a copy of it

Temari she already has a boyfriend who asked her out there in the fourth shinobi war secondly secondly I vaguely remember read an Internet website bio of this character and it made of reference to her being asked out by shinobi that you went to school wit in the sand village and only reason you never asked you out before was because of her brother and I don't think I need to explain that to you and she agreed to give it a try she thinks of the other Shikamaru as a lazy ass what you expect them as a fellow ninja and shinobi and they good friends but that's it just thought I'd give you a heads up if you want their try to stay true to the anime but unfortunately the site has been contaminated by not those naruto last movie for the tribe justification of what he did that's why you want to see what I said I swear on my biological fathers grave I read this I'm not kidding the reason I'm saying this is so you know that have been altered thought I'd give you a heads up but judging by what does where you already go to be a story that stinks

ShikaTema would never happen she thinks he's a lazy ass why he wants to marry an a civilian woman and she has a boyfriend in the sand sea by doing what you did you do know no better than what he in naruto last movie if you are truly the fan of Naruto then you would know this not for the sake of couples but it for the sake of the show but don't forget Sasuke has Karin uzumaki so he would be totally alone just try to keep that in mind when you buy alternate endings stay true to the show and what you observe not the couples you think you want to see but I do agree with you on a lot of what you wrote in fact on an out the wicked I saw The temari been asked out during the fourth show me war Boy sure to school with for the time he been afraid to ask her out because her brother I read that she has to go out and she said she'd give it a try they study at the fourth shinobi war this all I read this all before of the novel's last movie came out that's how I know it was there Republic contaminated it now but you have to believe me I did read this and the unfortunate forgot the guy name and just a side note the company the road now those last movie also wrote the season finale of Korra legends of Korra thought I'd give you a heads up but thank you for the story I just need to go back and correct it is it supposed to be you won't find me information because this contaminated because by this company Pierrot Studios does one who did naruto The last movie and the season finale of legends of Korra and just so you know the producer of last avatar Airbender and The Legend of Korra will approach forrelationship I give you two guesses work Studios that was the same company developed the ultimate and analysis last movie I believe in the original end in naruto that was supposed to die saving Sasuke because the movie was never about naruto life his legacy but did know it is original end then
By using the death consumption seal he's going to see the ten-tails into the moon giving his life up to save those that were precious to him well that's my theory anyways watch all the episodes of Naruto Shippuden answer foreshadowing of what was the comment of fourth shinobi war remember the stories Obito during the end of the third shinobi war sacrificed himself to save Kakashi give him his legacy his special Jitsu that was why in this story Sasuke claim he wanted to be Hokage it was a foreshadowing the people caught wind and people did not like the original ending any of the find a way to write the final story without offending his fans this is where I think Pierrot Studios came into the equation he asked him for the rights the story and they break their own version of what happened to the very same guys have pictures of hinata dressed in a Playboy bunny outfit and women lingerie the other two other students that also worked on it but I don't have the names unfortunately I'll try to get him