| Reviews for Contradictions |
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   AsketronNidavellir8 chapter 1 . 8/15 Wow. I never really thought how they would feel losing years and years of adulthood and getting jolted back into kid forms in a non-magical world. Hm. Very thoughtful story, Well written |
| flooingfleur chapter 1 . 2/12/2016 Beautifully written. Made me really think about how the children must have felt when they were suddenly back 'home'. |
| WhistlingWolf chapter 1 . 7/8/2015 And I indeed found something good, i like it! It certainly raises a question for me how age and wisdom can differentiate.. being young does not always mean you're not wise, and vice versa being old does not mean you're wise.. Must be hard to fit in. To go back to the ordinary life. I can only imagine fighting dragons, talking with animals and magic, lovely magic.. when i feel bad i can't have it, it must be even worse to lose it -.-' Sry, long review.. i like it ;) gonna check out your Kvothe story if only rothfuss would write faster ;( |
| TortoisetheStoryteller chapter 1 . 6/29/2015 Good job of pointing it all the little things the Pevensies would struggle with. |
| icesong180 chapter 1 . 6/15/2015 Woah...ok so I just read both of your narnia oneshots and they are AMAZING. Like I never really thought about how it must have been for them once they got back. So anyway, good job! |
| The Madmadam chapter 1 . 5/27/2015 Lovely. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/16/2015 This was really good! Thank you! :) I want to read more ;) |
| ErinKenobi2893 chapter 1 . 4/12/2015 This is amazing. Very well-done. |
| Dragons and Dragons chapter 1 . 3/30/2015 Wow. How do you think of these sorts of things? I doubt I can ever read Narniaa in quite the same light again. Superb. |
| OUATLovr chapter 1 . 2/9/2015 Wow, this was amazingly done. |
| Epsilon Scorpii chapter 1 . 2/9/2015 I liked your portrayal of their helplessness as they missed narnia but were powerless to do anything else, so they searched for their home in their own ways. I'm surprised that I found sense in the way Peter looked to fights for the old thrill of battle, considering it tied to the movie and I didn't really enjoy the second one. I would have liked to see a spark of hope at the end though, perhaps how they learnt to find solace, or that they found Aslan. Perhaps in a sequel? :) anyway thanks for sharing, emotion was palpable and realistic. |
| Windy Darlington chapter 1 . 2/8/2015 YES, forever Aslan, forever Narnia! You will always be a king or queen, because that is eternal, and England shall pass away... I LOVED this! This was phenomenal! It was just perfectly in-character too. I cannot express how much I enjoyed this, W.H.1492 |
| Lindsey7618 chapter 1 . 2/8/2015 Wow. You made me cry. Thanks. *Goes to die and cry in a hole* Hey, that rhymed. :( |
