This was lovely! Thank you for sharing your stories with us!

wow im begining to think you should be a author.

I so rarely review, but I absolutely had to! your writing style is impeccable. It flows well, your dialogue isn't overdone, and your pacing is wonderful! Beautiful prose that keeps us as the reader engaged. Seriously loved this all so much, because it was so well done, unlike many on the site. Well freaking done.

"You're not pupped." OG MY GOOOOOOOOOOOOD! LMAO. You never disappoint. 10/10.

great story

This is one of the best I have ever read!

Okay.

Good.

Great story! I loved it! :D
Keep up the good work!

Aaaw, I love it ;)

Wow, I gotta say this one impressed me. When I first saw how long this was, I had my doubts. It was hard to believe a one shot lemon could be this long without excessive dialog, needless events, or some other things I wouldn't like. But that wasn't the case. There was clearly no filler here. Everything unfolded naturally and didn't feel excessively long. I don't think I've ever read a lemon this long without any noticable typos, errors, negative aspects or really anything to complain about.

This really went smoothly from beginning to end. I like how you started with some typical Inu/Kag hijinks like what we normally see in the series/manga before transitioning into the steamy parts. That made the process feel very natural. As for the lemon itself, it was excellent. Again, I'm really impressed you managed to make it so long without feeling excessive or drawn out. The whole thing was quite enjoyable from beginning to end, and I like how you threw in some unique aspects based on Inuyasha's demon half, such as Kagome worrying about his claws and worry that he might somehow "override" her contraception.

Once again I must point out you set up a Mir/San sequel for this, intentionally or not. I'd love to see them trying some elaborate scheme to hook them up as a way to show their gratitude to Miroku. Or at the very least, Kagome could explain to him the proper way to romance a woman so his attempts don't get slapped down, literraly and figuratively.

So overall I gotta say this was really good and I don't have anything to complain about. It was just a solid enjoyable story the whole way through.

LOVED IT! 3

ok I will check it out...is there going to be more to this story?

Lol!:D:D
This is cute,romantic n really hot story!..:-)
I liked it... ;-)