Reviews for Well, I Wasn't Expecting This
Emerald2211 chapter 9 . 10/29/2019
Oh I really liked where you were going with this fic. It is a really nice idea. I very much liked it. Also could you please add abandoned or something in the summary?
pikapikachuuuuuu chapter 9 . 9/25/2019
it's ok the story isn't really good anyways
pikapikachuuuuuu chapter 7 . 9/25/2019
LOL definitly not slytherin material this one
pikapikachuuuuuu chapter 1 . 9/25/2019
lol definitly not slytherin material this one
sekelyn chapter 9 . 9/23/2019
it's good to hear from you and while I'm sad that you don't plan on continuing this story I still wish you luck in all of your future endeavors
ACH20 chapter 8 . 9/18/2019
I love this story! don't worry girl your doing good!
TheGirlWithCurls chapter 4 . 9/17/2019
I. . . Dont really fancy this work. Sorry. I just dont understand why she would reveal all that to olivander. It just. . . . Gryffindor rashness. There is no othed explanation.
Emerald Time chapter 8 . 2/24/2019
This is great! I love this so far. I really hope this isn't abandoned. I loved the twice-born part, I wonder if the Unspeakables keep track or even know about them? As for your questions, I wouldn't mind if you wanted to flesh out the American magical society properly, but only if it has a big impact on the story. If it's just one of the characters doing research, then just tidbits is probably fine and doesn't have to go too in depth. As for Hermione, well, I'm a little torn, because I love her character, but she does have a problem with thinking that adults/authority figures and books are always right, so I think a gradual friendship would be better. Whether she's working on behalf of Dumbles or not is up to you. But, once she gets over that, I think she would come around. Overall, she is logical and, although her pride might delay her, she does tend to come around.

I hope you get lots of inspiration for this! Thank you for writing and sharing this; good luck on your writing!
Hufflepuff-01 Melodie Erudite chapter 8 . 1/26/2019
I hope you update soon!
Olddantrucker chapter 1 . 1/16/2019
It's dumb they all play ME TOO to being born as infants.
Maxine chapter 8 . 12/11/2018
MORE!

I love your Harry, and the fact that it was a reborn soul in the story and that he realizes how shitty the world is. Although I kind of dislike the hate on Dumbledore- it's your story, so you do you.

I'd love to see more of it.
alicia7788 chapter 8 . 11/26/2018
UPDATE PLEASE
scarlettravencrove chapter 8 . 8/14/2018
Hope you continue this
SunshineBubbles chapter 8 . 5/25/2018
I know it’s been a while since you updated but I hope you haven’t abandoned your story as I really like it and hope to see more soon.
Campmaget chapter 8 . 5/5/2018
This is awesome why is it not continued.
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