Reviews for The First Date
excessivelyperky chapter 2 . 8/25/2018
Love this glance at Sev and Lily before the House system divided them.
excessivelyperky chapter 1 . 8/24/2018
This is so sweet between Lily and Severus. It would have been nice if it had stayed that way.
Rayniekinnz chapter 1 . 4/12/2015
Does anyone actually like that place? That must have been a very awkward beginning to their date!

I noticed you're missing "take" between "to" and "Lily" in the first section.

Very sweet!
HermyLuna2 chapter 2 . 2/27/2015
Awwwwwww. I am a sucker for Snily, so I really loved reading these drabbles.
LucyLuna chapter 1 . 2/12/2015
This was so cute.

I like that Severus was trying to be considerate and take her to a place girl's usually like. It was especially nice when he reflect on Lily's character when she told him it wasn't as good as she thought it would be.

This was super sweet and I loved it!
anotherboarduser chapter 2 . 2/11/2015
fun chapter
marionofthesnowdrifts chapter 1 . 2/11/2015
Very cute.
Lamia of the Dark chapter 1 . 2/10/2015
Aww, how cute!
anotherboarduser chapter 1 . 2/10/2015
nice short story
Nonamebrandbeans chapter 1 . 2/10/2015
Thun thun thun...my house in Budapest..oh for you oh you oh I give it all. Thun thun

Soori that was stuck in me.

Anyway you're a brilliant writer