| Reviews for Dark Storm |
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  Guest chapter 11 . 12/11/2016 Can please update this story please! It has been hanging there for months .. |
 RoseBloodmane chapter 11 . 6/8/2016 So far so good. I like the fact that Nanoha is stronger then Hayate well magical wise I guess. I like it when people make her the strongest one. In my stories she's ranked as a class level of Unknown (Mostly meaning know one know her true strength and it is restricted so know one can go through her background). I probably said a little to much about it. If you want more you'll have to wait for my stories about her... lol... I kind of pushing it doing 3 long stories of her with one going to 40 chapters long. Anyways Nice Story I'll be waiting for Chapter 12 and maybe some other chapters. I'd like to see how this ends. |
| oscura chapter 11 . 2/8/2016 por favor seguiii es increiblee |
| megameneko707 chapter 11 . 11/6/2015 Your story makes me wanna read the Dark Horse book. Also, i really like your version of it. Quick question, is Fate walking around the village in her human form? And is Reinforce with Hayate because they're soulmate? Update more and soon. Thanks and ciao |
| Guest chapter 11 . 8/16/2015 Just want to let you know that we are still waiting for your next chapter. Just curious will Vivio or Einhart appear on this story.? |
| Arya78 chapter 11 . 4/25/2015 A really Good chapter thank you |
| Guest chapter 11 . 4/24/2015 THIS REALLY GREAT I REALLY LIKE THIS,THANKS! AND IS SIGNUM WILL APPEAR IN THS STORY? |
| Lightarcana chapter 11 . 4/23/2015 hmm i wonder how lord gil will react to nanoha's power? will the clan be safe? when nanoha can kick jail's ass? XD hahaha cant wait for more! |
| darkvalk chapter 11 . 4/22/2015 I wonder if Jail will fall to this trap, I wouldn't be surprised if he have another ace up his sleeve. |
| Lightarcana chapter 10 . 4/16/2015 oh shit nanoha, you shouldnt touched the gem! i mean what if something bad happen, right? and theres an eye :0 haha i knew that hayate wouldn't tell anyone about the power nanoha! so dont worry too much and you have fate to protect you anyway hehe. I hope lord gil's clan will be safe since you know, that jail's offer because thats not a good sign though. cant wait for more! :) |
| skaiii chapter 10 . 4/14/2015 Can't wait for your next update :D I reaaaaally love your story :D |
| Arya78 chapter 10 . 4/14/2015 Hayate is more open-minded than I thought, I am a bit puzzled by that gem... please update soon |
| darkvalk chapter 10 . 4/14/2015 It's good Nanoha and Hayate are on somewhat good terms after their altercation, but this gem gives me a bad feeling... |
| Arya78 chapter 9 . 4/8/2015 well it was time for the two of them to settle things down |
| Guest chapter 9 . 4/8/2015 How old is Fate in this story? |
