Reviews for The Mystery |
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39DearMiku chapter 1 . 8/28/2018 Please, I lost my mind. Can I have a new one? I will give ya $100. |
SilverTomboy97 chapter 1 . 2/22/2018 i don't know whether to laugh at Hakuba's misfortune or to scold for not knocking the door in the first place or to pity him for seeing things he SUPPOSED not see... |
AngelsBeast chapter 1 . 8/28/2015 oh. my. god. poor hakuba XD |
AngelsBeast chapter 1 . 8/28/2015 oh. my. god. poor hakuba XD |
Shana-Fujioka chapter 1 . 5/1/2015 Ahahaha, that last statement was mean, but in overall this one shot was funny. xD |
Lmeg9.20 chapter 1 . 4/27/2015 Haha, this was an enjoyable read. Nice job |
christina-bella chapter 1 . 4/7/2015 I liked this story. I haven't read something like this before. Can you please continue it? Like Hakuba's next interaction with Shinichi... Hakuba searching for clues about if Shinichi knows about Kaito's secret identity. |
Assasin8 chapter 1 . 3/27/2015 LOL, poor Hakuba! XD that's not something I would want to walk in and catch my potentially kleptomaniac classmate and my acknowledged equal doing. I love that this was from Hakuba's point of view, that just made everything 10x funnier! Great job and thanks for posting! |
Mai-chan63 chapter 1 . 2/15/2015 Hahaha, I really liked this one! Hakuba's reaction and Kaito were really funny! The only thing I was less exited about were the last sentences. I think it's a bit over the top to have Hakuba actually puking at the memory of what he'd seen... But the rest was really good and I do hope to see more from you! |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/13/2015 oh my god im laughing so much, i love this. |
HeilHydra chapter 1 . 2/12/2015 Lolol that was hilarious! XD I really love fics where Hakuba finds out about Kaishin. He's such a fun character and I imagine many authors love writing about him. I need mooarrrr Kaishin ;; |
Miss Emotion chapter 1 . 2/13/2015 OMG YEY! ANOTHER FELLOW KAISHIN WRITER! The kaishin army will rule the world! Can I just say I found this hilarious, gotta love Hakuba! HAHAAHAHHAA I can just imagine Hakuba's awesome reaction. I loved this story! |
cookieswithmilktea chapter 1 . 2/12/2015 good job! i think you just traumatized hakuba XD |
ninja dragon16 chapter 1 . 2/12/2015 jajajajjajajaja |
DaydreamYourLifeAway chapter 1 . 2/12/2015 Very cute story :) I enjoyed it a lot. However, there were some grammar issue, particularly at the beginning with has/had. Other than that, you had a nice flow to the story. Thanks for writing and sharing! |