Reviews for The Mystery
39DearMiku chapter 1 . 8/28/2018
Please, I lost my mind. Can I have a new one? I will give ya $100.
SilverTomboy97 chapter 1 . 2/22/2018
i don't know whether to laugh at Hakuba's misfortune or to scold for not knocking the door in the first place or to pity him for seeing things he SUPPOSED not see...
AngelsBeast chapter 1 . 8/28/2015
oh. my. god. poor hakuba XD
AngelsBeast chapter 1 . 8/28/2015
oh. my. god. poor hakuba XD
Shana-Fujioka chapter 1 . 5/1/2015
Ahahaha, that last statement was mean, but in overall this one shot was funny. xD
Lmeg9.20 chapter 1 . 4/27/2015
Haha, this was an enjoyable read. Nice job
christina-bella chapter 1 . 4/7/2015
I liked this story. I haven't read something like this before.
Can you please continue it? Like Hakuba's next interaction with Shinichi... Hakuba searching for clues about if Shinichi knows about Kaito's secret identity.
Assasin8 chapter 1 . 3/27/2015
LOL, poor Hakuba! XD that's not something I would want to walk in and catch my potentially kleptomaniac classmate and my acknowledged equal doing. I love that this was from Hakuba's point of view, that just made everything 10x funnier! Great job and thanks for posting!
Mai-chan63 chapter 1 . 2/15/2015
Hahaha, I really liked this one! Hakuba's reaction and Kaito were really funny! The only thing I was less exited about were the last sentences. I think it's a bit over the top to have Hakuba actually puking at the memory of what he'd seen... But the rest was really good and I do hope to see more from you!
Guest chapter 1 . 2/13/2015
oh my god im laughing so much, i love this.
HeilHydra chapter 1 . 2/12/2015
Lolol that was hilarious! XD I really love fics where Hakuba finds out about Kaishin. He's such a fun character and I imagine many authors love writing about him. I need mooarrrr Kaishin ;;
Miss Emotion chapter 1 . 2/13/2015
OMG YEY! ANOTHER FELLOW KAISHIN WRITER! The kaishin army will rule the world! Can I just say I found this hilarious, gotta love Hakuba! HAHAAHAHHAA I can just imagine Hakuba's awesome reaction. I loved this story!
cookieswithmilktea chapter 1 . 2/12/2015
good job! i think you just traumatized hakuba XD
ninja dragon16 chapter 1 . 2/12/2015
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DaydreamYourLifeAway chapter 1 . 2/12/2015
Very cute story :) I enjoyed it a lot. However, there were some grammar issue, particularly at the beginning with has/had. Other than that, you had a nice flow to the story. Thanks for writing and sharing!