I read this (what feels like) a long time ago and absolutely loved it, and wowI still do! Greatness

“Who else could talk to you telepathically in my voice?” Lmao, Idk why that’s funny, but it gave me a good laugh

To b honest, when I read the summary at the beginning I wasent really interested but now that I've read a chapter I'm hooked. Good job

When I was playing on that level I kept losing too but I finally beat it cause when every enemies comes at me or Bardock I just keep on using the Super Electric Strike that attack makes everything easy just get the Super Electric Strike and then you'll be able to beat the Bardock level

Gohan's bloodshed reminds me of that bloodlust ability in your two story called the colony and the refugees cause goku killed alot of people back then

It was good THEN it had mira and towa

I want to start off by saying that overall this was one of the better stories I've read.

While I did enjoy it, I also have a couple complaints. I know you already know about the complaints with your writing style and grammar so I'll skip that, I've read worse and yours didn't bother me too much, but I want to bring up that you rushed your story too much. At times I felt like too much was happening too fast, some of your chapters could've been broken up and had more details added. You also had some large time skips and simply summarized what happened in a quick author's note at the top of the chapter. Some of that would've made great material.

I also feel like you assumed to much from us readers. A lot of the times I felt like the characters were too out of character and while I know that this is your story and that this is a fanfiction, you could've given us a little backstory to explain why they would react differently than canon.

While I may have enjoyed the plot of your story, it isn't what you advertised it to be. I clicked on your story because I was interested in seeing Gohan as a teenage teacher and his interactions with students his age. The concept offered a unique twist to the overused "Gohan goes to highschool stories", that's why I clicked your story, there was a lot of potential. I liked how you made him start of as a student teacher, it made sense, it would teach him the ropes. It would be ridiculous just throw him into the teaching spot when he has absolutely no experience having never even been to a highschool himself. The first few chapters were excellent, my only issues were of personal preference, but it's your story not mine, I still greatly enjoyed them. The problem is that you abandoned the concept really early. He never even became an actual teacher, he quit fairly early on in the story. I liked seeing the xenoverse villains (having played some of it myself) and I liked the humor, but that isn't why I picked your story.

Overall I enjoyed your story. It wasn't what I was looking for, but it pulled along for the ride regardless. I'm sure with experience you'll be an excellent writer. I'll have to wait and see your future stories to see how you improve. I look forward to it.

I do enjoy your plot so far, it's a take I haven't seen yet, and a fairly logical solution to Gohan teaching at a young age. The writing is kind of hard to understand, however. Now, it's not enough to be unreadable, and you are free to write however you want, but maybe you should take some of this criticism into consideration? I feel you could be an absolutely wonderful writer with practice; you're off to a good start. Or you can just ignore me and head on your merry way :P

I don't know. It's only been three chapters and I'm slowly becoming more and more disappointment with the direction of the story. Some of the reasons I'm losing faith in the story include;

1. The fact that Videl was able to 'google' Gohan and come up with some result, when you stated that Bulma is already restricting access to the site. If Bulma is able to restrict access then I'm sure she can make the articles disappear. It just seems like a weak excuse for Videl to find out about Gohan's past.

2. Gohan has been giving away his secret, yet in your Author's Notes you state that he is doing his best to not associate himself with Piccolo. And the very next sentence you said 'Piccolo, my friend...' Well that makes no sense. And in the end you have Gohan just explain Saiyan to Videl...come on.

3. Gohan's outburst seemed kind of rushed and with very little provocation. Piccolo showed up to do absolutely nothing and honestly I would have preferred if he hadn't shown up because he did little to help other than to throw a little one-liner.

I'll try to finish this story, but I'm losing faith.

It's been a while since I have seen this type of story. There are just not enough 'Gohan the Teacher' stories out there. I've been anxiously awaiting to read this story and I finally was able to get to it.

The first chapter was a solid one, though there were a couple things that made me tilt my head but nothing too big to turn me away. I like that we will see a more independent Gohan, with his apartment and all.

I think my biggest complaint is that two different people were speaking within the same paragraph, but I'm assuming that has been an issue you already fixed.

This fanfic was amazing it's sad for it to have ended I really enjoyed reading this I'll be sure to check out some more of them.

You cracked me up at the end XD

This is the first story that I read that had a /Lime pairing. The bit with Nappa made me laugh. The dance between Gohan and Videl was beautiful,and overall I like how the story ended. Great job. :)

I liked this chapter! Gohan was getting a lot of action in this one ;)

lel this is shiz u huv non skills