My Jelsa shipper heart is pretty much happy, thank you! :')

yeap! most definately did! thank you!

That was so good! Great work!

And an added note: it brings me joy that finally I found a jelsa fanfic that has a hiccstrid in it! Like serioisly its so hard to find one, since im not a fan of the mericupp thing(no offense) Hoorah!

Nice story. Wow, Jack has a lot of stamina there. Anyways, good luck with your future stories.

1 Review. That was hot as fuck.

I read this before and now I'm reading it again, and I can't stop smiling. Every fucking time. Great job! So sweet!

That was definitely the best one shot I've read in forever, most likely at all. You had the perfect amount of build up and delivery. The back story played into the miniature plot very well. The side stories also gave it the real feeling. And the sex was the perfect blend of smut and feels! I loved it!

Oh my frickin' gosh. I have had many ideas about whether or not that Jack Frost and Elsa should be a thing. I guess that I'm not the only one who has written about it. Though I wouldn't have written it straight out like that, the whole story was pretty good. That was one of the best Disney/DreamWorks mix ups that I have ever read in my whole career in writing. So funny. Though Tooth/Jack is cute, I totally dig Jack/Elsa. The irony of the couple is so obvious.
Special thanks to the Character,
Kristoff be more nice to your buddy when you're drunk. Anna, why aren't you hanging around your sister (like always). Professor Black, you're Pitch Black, right? Thanks for doing something right in your life, like teaching children instead of terrorizing them. Elsa, thank you for having a thing for Jack and making my writing dreams come true. Jack, thank you for not being a idiot and saying yes to Elsa's ultimate question. And surprisingly not being hung over in her apartment. Thank you, Furiyan for making this story good (this is the first time I have thanked a author besides just writing a review). Thank you whoever for reading this and loving DreamWorks and Disney.
Love, The White Dragon,
Zane S. White

I've very recently gotten into Elsa x Jack Frost fics and this was very well written. Your writing style is very refreshing and easy to read. I hope to write as well as you do, you balance humour and lemon writing extremely well, so well that I'm a little embarrassed, ashamed and in awe that you wrote something so lovely, and it seemed so effortless (which I know it isn't because writing fanfics take a lot of time and effort, well in my case it does.). Many thanks for writing such a lovely story.

XD yes! I loved it! I want more!

loved it

THE ENDING IS GREAT HAHAHAHA

This was the most amazing fandiction I've read. Please keep writing fanfictions like this.

Man, I love your phrasing! I'm still hung up on the Four Horsemen doing the Harlem Shake. All I can picture is a Terri Pratchett-inspired version of this. I'm still laughing my ass off :D

Oh, and Jack knowing about rule 34. That dirty little boy. Not surprised he likes doggy style :P

It was a bit weird to read about Tooth and Bunny going behind Jack's back, 'cause I, personally, consider Tooth to be really sweet and caring and Bunny is one with principles. But eh... it works for the story, I guess.

Soooo, needless to say, the smut was awesome and hot as fuck! You should really consider writing even more of it and I'm so not saying this cause I'm a little perv *shifty eyes*

Also, I have to agree - Elsa totally swallows.

one shot sequel i love this story