Talk about getting intense!

Nice set up, is the storyline as a whole ending or is it just this particular story? 'cause these fics are few and far between and are so often amazing ones that aren't finished, sorry just am really sad to see this ending.

This has me interested because, when I first watched the Water 7 arc, before the reveal that Kaku was CP9, I thought that either he or Paulie would join the Straw Hats.

This is wonderful. You know, as fleeting as fanfics are sometimes, I would really like that this one follow until the end of its journey. If you want to write this story until its end though, the most important advice I can give you is to avoid the station of the canons. Don't make the story identical to One Piece, use your imagination, make things different : at worst you can give some additional challenge to accomodate Kaku's presence, at best make the story of One Piece change a bit : show us the effect of Kaku's presence on the entire arching story of One Piece. Perhaps I'm asking too much but I would really like that.

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Really nice chapter.

Oh my gosh you just don't realize how happy this makes me! I really, absolutely love your story. There's not enough kaku fanfics out there especially since quizilla been taking down. I was sad, thinking you weren't able to finish this fanfic due to circumstances that came up. In short love your work and keep up the excellent work.

I really like this fanfiction please please please continue if you can. Very sad there hasn't been any new chapters/updates for some time now.

I really like your work please make moreeee ( I read really fast and blow by most book series)

Wonderful!
I'm so happy to read the new Chapter 3
I hope so much that you write more 3

Awesome updates!

Your Story is so nice!
Please write more! 3
It's so exciting...!

I really like this story. When are you gonna updated it? I really need to know what happen next!

I really like your Fanfiction. It's sorta hard find fics on the cp9 especially nowadays bc it's been forever since they were on screen. Your ideas as to how the upbringing of the cp9 went were really interesting and intriguing. You don't really find much about theories to their childhood and stuff. So yeah. I really enjoyed this fic. Sadly it seems incomplete but what you wrote was reaaaaal gd great 3
Have a nice day

I love this story and would love to see more of it. I'm sad you've yet to update it in so long (or any story really). Hopefully nothing terrible has happened to you, and if you come back know there'll be one person waiting (and if you never come back, okay. Life happens and sometimes death which hopefully hasn't occurred).