To say I loved it...would be an utter understatement.

I love when the union between two people is depicted more than just the flesh. It's connections of soul more like it.

And you handled it really beautifully. :)

This was very well written. All the right words used. I love it :-)

Amazing work. That was by far the most intimate and most tasteful lemon I have read to date on fan fiction. 5 stars!

PEace!

A few mistakes here and there, but it's generally well done

This is so beautiful... I might cry huhuhuh :')

bEautiful.

Wow. I just.
I'm speechless.
This was very very beautifully written! I really love this piece! You did a great job on conveying their feelings while at the same time telling the story. Beautiful!
Great work! :)

This story was so perfect, great way of writing!

Love it

That was so sweet.