I like your storie that you written. I thought it cool how in tune you made the characters perspective sound like. Keep writing more stories there really cool.

That's beautiful.
I love the more detail of Nancy and Prince Edward.

This chapter was interesting, Nancy taking the changes of real world to Andalasia and being surprised about them. I would have liked a last pov of Nancy. I still enjoyed what I read.

Aww...so cute. Edward honest and fairy tail kind of love and Nancy being a pragmatic but still a complete dreamer.

A date? Haha. I have read this before, and I still cracked when reading this line. It's great because of course Edward would do in the real world what he has learned it's done in the real world.

Oh my god, this is so cute!
I liked the way you described Nancys thoughts etc. :)
Thank you, I really enjoyed it!

I have no idea why but I was thinking of Enchanted today and I've always had a soft spot for this pairing, and I realized I've never seen any fanwork for them. So I looked it up, thinking hey, why not, and I found this.
I started reading. It was adorable. I made squeaky sounds of joy. I got to chapter 2, where they're both uncertain and afraid, and I told myself that I was seriously NOT going to cry over a fanfic for a movie I hadn't even watched in a good while.
I started chapter 3.
And cried like a baby.
This is just so well done and beautifully put together, and I love how slow and soft but at the same time fast and excited they are! Thank you for this! (Also I originally read this on ao3 so I saw and adored chapter 5 too, but I don't have an account over there so couldn't leave comments). Thanks for this loveliness! And if you ever decide to continue you can bet I'll read and review that too!

Aww cute

I hope you continue this i really like it