It was refreshing. Very few people reveal Shirou's character (Almost Archer). And the actions that he can take to save many. I respect you for your courage to write this work, despite the inevitable criticism from people who do not understand Shirou from the bad end of the feeling of heaven.

if you think Magus "Killer" is just need to kill anything he told to, you're wrong

Me gustó tu fic. una historia con Shirou mind of steel casi no existe en fanfiction ya que se la pasan con el inocente y bien intencionado Shiro como si fuera la ruta Fate. sería una buena idea de un fic en la que MoS Shirou es invocado por Rin como Archer: la reacción del pelirrojo al ver como su futuro yo cumplió su sueño transformándose en un verdadero monstruo es prometedor
Shirou antihero for the win

the only fic i regretted reading. I'm glad both the story and writer is dead.

tldr trash fic. powerlevels all outta whack. You probably never watched any fsn or sekirei anime cuz the magus killer only got kills due to strategic planning and schemes/traps and being underestimated by arrogant opponents, not fighting them head on as soon as he spots them. if this was Gilgamesh reborn then yeah sure, and he might even take out 01 if he goes serious from the start.

sorry thats not a review, just a rant - especiall cuz im not gonna read that fic and its already complete since about 2 years, so nobody will read this "review/rant" either

i just wanna say, i really find it sucky if ppl use abbrevations and expect everyone to know them
wtf does MoS mean? it doesnt point to any of the official Fate/Stay Night routes ("Fate", "Heavens Feel" and "Unlimited Blade Works" - for those who arent aware already)

for all i know it means "Master of Shibari" or "Molested on Submarines"

rant over

kthxbye

I understand that he is supposed to be ruthless. But he doesn't really asses the situation. He just goes there to kill, not even bothering to see find out why the death's happened and who he should really be killing.

If he was Mos then why is he like 'some aliens killing people, let's perform genocide on their race'. He doesn't even know if all of the had to die. Just assumes.

MoS! Shirou remains the damn scary Shirou beyond a doubt.

Mind of Steel indeed. This is Shirou portrayed as Kiritsugu after all.

And so the Emiya family is continued to be cursed.

"For the sake of humanity" is Alaya. Gaia turned downright bloodthirsty and called in favors for a reason, not because it was a monster.

People like Shirou, destructive idiots and those with bloated egos ended up destroying the world. That is what Gaia saw, and Type-Moon agreed. Soon Mercury, and the other Types followed suit in time in agreement.

Some kick up a fuss storm. This is just normal. It's no different from an old man dying from disease and body failure. People don't want to see it but it's there.

Shirou didn't give up his ideal but was forced to harden his mind to continue down that road. Otherwise you get an EMIYA.

It was decently written but I find this out of character for Shiro unless he's literally one step away from becoming EMIYA.

entertaining story. :)

shirou is a tad too f*cked up for my taste, though...

Dude, ouch. Yeah, can see Shiro ending up like this, but never want to read of it again. Little to close to a possible reality with government oversite. Yep, if the Feds ruled, this would happen, and they do.

Wow, looking through the comments shows just how many people don't actually know the source material. This is based around the Superhero bad end to Heaven's Feel where Shirou becomes a more hardcore Kiritsugu who goes on to kill both Rin and Illya and win the Grail War, not a retard hell-bent on self-destruction. There is no happy ending, there is only death, and this fic accurately portrays that. The Sekirei and the whole Plan is a threat, and threats are removed, simple as that.

He doesnt take it well is an understatement

Well.. I don't know what to say? Well done in making an unpleasant main character? Despite the number of words describing the background of the character, I couldn't really find a reason to like or emotionally connect to the story. All in all it was somewhat unpleasant experience. The writing itself was passable, although the dialogue was kind of stilted, and the emo monologues was a bit much at times. You might be a decent writer, but I can't tell from this story. I'll check out other stuff you've written.