That was amazing! I could see everything happening like it was on the show. You described the character's personalities perfectly. I'd be happy to read more of your work!

Awwwww,cute!

I won't say like it but also won't say I hated it. Why I was bullied myself when I started school up untill middle school but I would never allow anyone to harm my pet if had one at that age. I would have tolled someone of it sooner but all the same I don't blame twilight for defending spike the way she did and I accoully feel like me and her are connected in a way. I went through the same thang when I was her age so I really understand.

LOVED IT

This was lovely. I was excited to read a fanfic based on this concept and I must say you captured the characters super well and I got all the emotion I expected.

I LOVED THIS. this was so amazing. you did wonderfully.

this was just awesome. i loved the expression of how disappointed and saddened celestia was, of not being told of twilights plight. something that celestia would be very worried about.

I love this, and it's a good explanation as to why Twilight was so adament about making friends; good job writing this :)

Amazing work! I loved reading this from beginning to end!

This is a great story

That was...beautiful. It resonated with me and I particularly found twilight fighting amusing despite not being a fighter. Also it's a viable explanation about Twilight's disillusionment about friendship despite Celestia's claims to the contrary.

Oh man this is why I hate bullies. X-(

Fantastic job on the story! The characterization of the canon characters are spot on, and I also love how you wrote both of the bullies. Spike was just too adorable in this fic as well, and I think you did a great job at describing the scenes presented. All in all great job!

Nice job on the story.