Reviews for look at this mess that you've made of my heart
Guest chapter 1 . 6/4/2018
So well written. I really enjoyed this!
PurpleYin chapter 1 . 5/11/2018
Enjoyed the angstiness of this. :)
TheEliteLabRatsLover chapter 1 . 12/31/2016
This is awesome. Just plain and simply awesome. ;)
LaueHime chapter 1 . 11/22/2015
I like how you did this! The drama made it exciting, but you also picked all the right words to make it emotional also. I liked how you wrote Iris as being pulled between being angry and being worried about her best friend. I thought it was very believable and it fit the characters. Their reunion at the end just melted my heart :) good job!
Ensimismada chapter 1 . 11/15/2015
Love how much this story respects Iris as a round character, with depth and emotions and conflict. In particular, I like how it highlights the impact Barry's coma made on her, a long-term impact that puts her on edge to point of panic attacks feels right and real, giving weight to the relationship. Movie night is a bit of a gimmick, but it's woven in nicely at the beginning. This is a bittersweet story, but I like the balance struck, and, of course, the sweet ending.
Westallen chapter 1 . 11/12/2015
Amazing
keep-swinging chapter 1 . 10/27/2015
The feelings in this man, spot on. I don't know how exactly you do it, and I would love to be able to write emotion just as well as you do, but you are able to make me feel like I'm standing right there watching the story unfold before my very eyes and it's shocking. It's shocking how great you are at twisted emotions and throwing things around and somehow making a masterpiece of writing in the process.

This was an unbelievable story. Never stop writing. :)
Guest chapter 1 . 10/14/2015
That was so sweet. Awesome job portraying the characters.
cocopops1995 chapter 1 . 5/19/2015
omw feels on top of feels on top of feeeeeeels!
Younger Dr. Grey chapter 1 . 4/18/2015
I literally had to scroll down and make sure you weren't about to kill Barry. When he wasn't stablizing and everyone was freaking out, I scrolled down to the point of 'he heals fast,' and then went back up bc I needed to prepare myself for what you were doing to me.

So incredibly well done, and the beauty of the medium speaks in the perfect time lapse of weeks without contact that feel real and also do a great job of showing the monotony and anguish in the angry solo time. I'm basically reading everything you've written for this fandom right now, and I don't know how to handle how great your characterization and tone and style and just vibe is. You get the show and the characters and the core of them in a way that's so ridiculously refreshing and energizing.

& your tumblr URL is awesome.
Art Is The Weapon chapter 1 . 3/28/2015
Cool fic. I have an odd complaint though, but I really felt that some of the swears seemed pretty out of place and there wasn't much need for it.
brulandia chapter 1 . 3/16/2015
Awn... sad but lovely..i like it.
Purple-Jaxie chapter 1 . 3/17/2015
Very cute and well constructed!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/5/2015
Man that was soo cute and sad and amazing
Pineapplejuicerules chapter 1 . 3/4/2015
That was angsty. Very well written. And I think, because inevitably sometime iris will find out, that it has a chance of happening like this.
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