Reviews for My alpha and me |
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Guest chapter 11 . 10/5/2019 Can’t wait until you do an update. I’m on bed rest and found your stories enjoyable to read but please do update very soon. |
BratGirl1983 chapter 11 . 5/23/2019 I am really looking forward to the next chapters, please update. |
Lucyole chapter 11 . 4/30/2019 Very interesting and exciting story. Hermione got an Harem of Handsome men the animagus's are great to love it is there more or is it complete? When not then please update *cookies for inspiration and the great work* |
dani asmar potter chapter 1 . 7/6/2018 Please update!/ |
LibraOfSlytherin chapter 5 . 6/13/2018 ...Maybe it's just me because I've gone through and read all the comments but, all of the characters in this book are BEYOND OOC. I understand it's your book and you wrote it and you're going to do whatever you want with the characters. I truly do understand. Albeit, it makes it very hard to read and comprehend when the characters don't act right. And I'm looking specifically at Severus Snapecertain things he says and does are basically unrecognizable. And Hermione being overly compliant and believing anything anybody says to her. Like what? That statement of Sirius being Draco's uncle was incorrect (even though it seems like you somehow made Narcissa related to the ZABINI* family). Draco is Sirius's cousin in canon (which could've been easily Googled), second cousin in fact. I am honestly surprised I made it to the 5th chapter without commenting but with all the spelling mistakes, grammatical errors and OOC-ness, I couldn't hold my tongue any longer. I probably won't continue to the rest of the book, that much isn't clear. But I know one thing that is clear, yo need a beta. None of this was meant to offend but instead, help better the story for further chapters. I'm that the plot behind the story is a good one. |
RAV3N R1PP3R chapter 11 . 6/12/2018 Loved the update |
SereniteRose chapter 11 . 6/11/2018 what a lovely and sweet chapter, thanks ever so much. |
SereniteRose chapter 12 . 8/16/2016 another very sweet and nice new chapter, thanks ever so much I've missed reading this story thanks again. |
BratGirl1983 chapter 10 . 7/3/2016 Love it, I look forward to the next chapters. |
Guest chapter 8 . 5/5/2016 This is an interesting story to say the least! I was ok with a triad, but think a quad with the dark lord is a little too much. To be honest, I would have preferred if it was just Hermione and Severus. I know you are exploring all the possibilities, but feel like you are throwing everything into this including the kitchen sink way too fast for me. Sometimes you can go too far as to make it not enjoyable to read for your readers any more. Just something to think about, and I'm sure not everyone thinks this way. Thank you for sharing! |
Tilty.bbb chapter 10 . 5/2/2016 This was great. Nice job |
RAV3N R1PP3R chapter 10 . 4/11/2016 Love the update. |
DarkStrom920 chapter 10 . 4/10/2016 can't wait and see what happens next |
kuu.mochizuki.3 chapter 10 . 4/8/2016 more please it was awesome and I cant wait to read the rest of this incredible story :3 |
Lusting for Life chapter 2 . 4/8/2016 I like the story but there are several grammatical errors that make it difficult to read |