I left a previous review around chapter 14 and let me just say...

fuck.

This story, though short, had me laughing out loud, hyperventilating, and sobbing. Chapter 18 genuinely had me sobbing so hard that I had to wait until I stopped so I could continue reading. You stuck so well to the characters, the story made sense, the fight scenes were intense as hell, and the love between characters was real and palpable. I genuinely loved every damn second of this book and I hope that you continue to write more, and maybe consider going professional. I know that I wouldn't be able to put one of your books down.

I mentioned in my previous review, but I've never left a review for anything before. This story, though, deserves it. Very very very well done.

I've never posted a review for a story before or anything like that, but holy fuck. Just casually reading this in my bed and I literally almost fell off during this chapter. I'm crying real tears and UGh this is amazing and I can't wait to continue reading.

Also this is high key better than most of the actual Korra show-

What a cliffhanger! I love ur story. Pls continue :)

Where is the sequel ;-; but your story is damn good love it.

Totally love this story! Are you still going to post a sequel? It's been 3 years... Please go on!

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I thought she was going to take his bending but damn!

Ok I love this story. A bit too close at the border to too dark for my taste but very well written. Keep it up ;)

Grande...espero que tengas una secuela para esto

This was a great story. I am a little disappointed that you haven't started the sequel yet, but I have to say your RWBY stories are also really epic. I do hope you eventually get around to writing the sequel though. Thank you for taking the time to write so many great stories.

Will there ever be a sequel?

What's gonna be the name of the new story?

I'm confused is bolin and mako grandma and cousins live at asami's place

Awesome read! I got tears in my eyes from reading this. So the big question, when is the sequel coming out? There must be one cause those assassin bastards are not done with the Avatar and will probably go after her family friends and Asami to get her. Reguardless awesome read and enjoy rading your other work. Keep it up and thanks!

I cried a dozen times when read this story I loved every single chapter and how at every ending there was always a surprise that made you want to move on to the next chapter. You had my attention through out all of the chapters and I loved the part when Korra and Asami shared intimacy for the first time it was special for them as it was to me the reader. The plot of the story was very written well too, when you answered that that korra was dead I broke out in tears but when you said at the end to hang in there I had some relief and was really curious as to what was going to happen next. At the end of the story you left us at a cliff hanger it was painful to read that cliff hanger but I know it was for a purpose. I look forward to the next sequel thank you for such a wonderful story