Reviews for Lucy of the Strawhats
Chickenhell chapter 12 . 5/28
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kerrowe chapter 10 . 2/18
At least blood loss doesn't seem to have been a concern yet with those powers..wonder if she can use other people's blood once she makes contact with it.
kerrowe chapter 8 . 2/18
Ah it was already decided.
kerrowe chapter 7 . 2/18
Ice blue diamond like fruit?
Maybe something that can form and coat things with hard diamond/Crystal?
Trained enough maybe can make pathways and walls like ice. Or use it to make armor or makeshift weapons?
Or even "invisible" crystal walls?
Guest-Questioner chapter 12 . 1/22
I APOLOGIZE IN ADVANCE, FOR I DO NOT KNOW, IF FAN-FIC WOULD GET THIS UPLOADED!

Entire chapter's, consisting of a battle is, okay, but what about interaction's between character's?

If a story, any story, focuses all its the intention on fighting, that leaves VERY little room,
for character development, which is a true necessity of any REAL story.

Action, is great, but if a characters' life is only that, then it is very, one-dimensional.

Take Natsu, his character is built around the, if it doesn't break, keep hitting until does, mind set,
Though, its because igneel had raised him, so hitting thing's until it break's is all he really knows.

Check back to the original intent of the story, this story, stems from the old,
fairy tail abandons Lucy Heartfillia idea, but WHICH variation of the abandonment is it?

ALL of fairy tail, or smaller portion's?

There is,

Team Natsu: Natsu Dragneel, Grey Fullbuster, Erza Scarlet, and Happy, the exceed.

Team, Shadow Gear:Levy McGarden, Jet(Sarusuke) and Droy.

Team, Thunder-God Tribe: Laxus Dreyar, Freed Justine, Evergreen & Bickslow.

Team(not really) The Strauss sibling's: Mirajane, Elfman, and Lisanna.

Everyone else whose named in Fairy Tail:

Makarov Dreyar, Gildarts Clive, Cana Alberona, Gajeel Redfox, Juvia Lockser, Wendy Marvell,
Carla & Panther Lily, the exceed's.

Alzack & Bisca Connell, Macao & Romeo Conbolt, Wakaba Mine, Max Alors, Nab Lasaro,
Reedus Jonah, Vijeetor Ecor, Warren Rocko, Laki Oiletta, and Kinana.

I can't name EVERYONE, so these are just the one's with the most known screen time, of sort's.

Out of the whole, of the guild, these are the most prominent guild member's, via, the anime.

AHEM, So who, among all these name's, are the individual's, that abandoned Lucy Heartfillia?

Once you get thing's settled, then, continue forward.

The most obvious idea of ANY crossover, is inserting one or more character's, from another series,
into the other half, of the crossover, and having those inserted character's, travel,
through most of the canon story-line of said series.

This would be, Abandoned Lucy Heartfillia of Fairy Tail, seemingly become a crew & family,
of the Straw Hat Pirates', of One Piece, going along ALL their adventure's, and possibly,
altering some of the original outcome, from the main, one piece canon story-line.

Ever hear of Self-Insert stories, a crossover is ALMOST, like that, with character(s) from one side,
having an adventure, in the other, by either, following the other stories, story-line,
as close as possible, without altering the main canon history too much, from their interaction's, or,
seemingly changing just about everything, from canon history, with their interaction's with everyone.

Inhale, exhale, okay, End Review.
Guest-Questioner chapter 12 . 1/22
Entire chapter's, consisting of a battle is, okay, but what about interaction's between character's?

If a story, any story, focuses all its the intention on fighting, that leaves VERY little room,
for character development, which is a true necessity of any REAL story.

Action, is great, but if a characters' life is only that, then it is very, one-dimensional.

Take Natsu, his character is built around the, if it doesn't break, keep hitting until does, mind set,
Though, its because igneel had raised him, so hitting thing's until it break's is all he really knows.

Check back to the original intent of the story, this story, stems from the old,
fairy tail abandons Lucy Heartfillia idea, but WHICH variation of the abandonment is it?

ALL of fairy tail, or smaller portion's?

There is,

Team Natsu: Natsu Dragneel, Grey Fullbuster, Erza Scarlet, and Happy, the exceed.

Team, Shadow Gear:Levy McGarden, Jet(Sarusuke) and Droy.

Team, Thunder-God Tribe: Laxus Dreyar, Freed Justine, Evergreen & Bickslow.

Team(not really) The Strauss sibling's: Mirajane, Elfman, and Lisanna.

Everyone else whose named in Fairy Tail:

Makarov Dreyar, Gildarts Clive, Cana Alberona, Gajeel Redfox, Juvia Lockser, Wendy Marvell,
Carla & Panther Lily, the exceed's.

Alzack & Bisca Connell, Macao & Romeo Conbolt, Wakaba Mine, Max Alors, Nab Lasaro,
Reedus Jonah, Vijeetor Ecor, Warren Rocko, Laki Oiletta, and Kinana.

I can't name EVERYONE, so these are just the one's with the most known screen time, of sort's.

Out of the whole, of the guild, these are the most prominent guild member's, via, the anime.

AHEM, So who, among all these name's, are the individual's, that abandoned Lucy Heartfillia?

Once you get thing's settled, then, continue forward.

The most obvious idea of ANY crossover, is inserting one or more character's, from another series,
into the other half, of the crossover, and having those inserted character's, travel,
through most of the canon story-line of said series.

This would be, Abandoned Lucy Heartfillia of Fairy Tail, seemingly become a crew & family,
of the Straw Hat Pirates', of One Piece, going along ALL their adventure's, and possibly,
altering some of the original outcome, from the main, one piece canon story-line.

Ever hear of Self-Insert stories, a crossover is ALMOST, like that, with character(s) from one side,
having an adventure, in the other, by either, following the other stories, story-line,
as close as possible, without altering the main canon history too much, from their interaction's, or,
seemingly changing just about everything, from canon history, with their interaction's with everyone.

Inhale, exhale, okay, End Review.
Escanor chapter 12 . 1/17
I like your story but the thing im confused is the arc their on. So what arc are they on is it the pacifista with kuma and all?
And i know this is too far off but will it be possible to implement haki on Lucy aswell as giving her her own swordstyle and i was thinking its the same with kimetsu no yaiba, it will only be when she and zorro trains with Mihawk if you ever reach that arc

so here's the list of move's i think would be a nice addition:
The Mark of the Sun state: since Lucy trained under Mihawk, she also learned the use of Breaths,in this state, she is in a calm collected state as it also increases her strength, speed and reaction time drastically, as she becomes easily capable of dodging and countering enemies that are to fast for her to face up against on base form without haki ( observation and armament) it would also be cool if she learned future kenbushoku haki or observation haki when they reach Big Mom's arc ( if ever this story lasts long enough to reach it )

On a side note:
This story has a lot of potential to explode in popularity, you just gutta play it right ,but any how on to the rest

So here are the move set that i thought out for Lucy: do note that most of the move set focuses on beaheading opponents
Waltz (円えん舞ぶ Enbu if you like japanese version's): A single concentrated slash.

Blue Heaven (碧へき羅らの天てん Heki-ra no ten): Lucy jumps and spins her body while creating a 360-degree slash

Scorching Crimson Mirror (烈れつ日じつ紅こう鏡きょう Retsujitsu kōkyō): Lucy unleashes two horizontal slashes that defends her from attacks from the front or the side.

Flame Waltz (炎えん舞ぶ Enbu not sure about this one's translation): A two-combo strike which starts with a vertical slash and then a horizontal one right after.

Parhelion Rainbow (幻げん日にち虹こう Gen'nichi kō): Lucy uses this technique to evade techniques or dangerous moves from powerful enemies using high-speed twists and rotations. It works most effectively on enemies with good vision or superior haki as it tricks their haki into believing where the next attack will hit, as they will attack an afterimage of her and not her actual body.

Fire Chariot (火か車しゃ Kasha): Lucy uses this technique in quick succession with Parhelion Rainbow and attacks the enemy while they are distracted.

Burning Sun (灼しゃっ骨こつ炎えん陽よう Shyakkotsu en'yō): A circular slash that defends from imminent frontal attacks.

Billion Sun Stab ( 十億日刺 10 Oku-nichi sashi ) As the name implies, a multiple thrust with the sharp blade coated in a mix of her Magic and Armament Haki or the advance version of armament (thats up to you)

Trillion Sun Stab ( 兆太陽刺し Chō taiyō-zashi ): A stronger, greater and faster version of its predecessor that uses Future Kenbunshoku Haki (observation haki) to quickly dispatch opponents

Blood Burst: since Lucy's body is unique hdue to her devil fruit blood became flammable, and with acidic properties that make it very corrosive that can melt most metals and some coated with armament (except sea stone prism) it can also explode on Lucy's command ( mentally or verbally ) along with its potency depending on how much blood there is

Solar Halo Dragon Dance (日にち暈うんの龍りゅう 頭かぶり舞まい Nichiun no Ryū Kaburimai ):
A combination attack utilizing Lucy's unique Devi Fruit( or simply because she has also magic on her) Blood Burst, Lucy's sword adopts a mix of dark red and purple colour and is coated in purple flames ( only when using armament haki). While in this state, she circles the enemy in a pattern resembling a flaming dragon and slashes them multiple times, ultimately beheading them.

Waltz Flash (円えん舞ぶ一いっ閃せん Enbu Issen) Lucy developed this move when she saw one of Mihawk's move's and combined it with her Flame Waltz by pumping air magic and haki through her entire body, focusing it on the legs, and releasing it all, while ending with a flaming slash. The technique was capable of out-speeding Katakuri's fastest enhanced special move along with it being to fast for intermidiary users of kenbushoku haki but future kenbushoku might struggle but just a little.(which i forgot what it was )

Calm of The Orient Seas: unlocked by Lucy on some part when pushed to the absolute limit and unlocked through a possible training arc? She gained the ability to foresee the opponent's attack while showing no battle spirit and sense of blood-lust; gaining immunity from anyone who can sense these. kinda like One Piece's obsevation haki but being invisible to normal humans and devil fruit user who use their minds Haki and etc..

L'Apothéose: The blade shifts and aquires multiple swords, to run enemies through in the blink of an eye. While her Devil Fruit is mixed with her sword and with the help of magic

L'Éclat: A powered up version of L'Apothéose that strikes enemies at a longer range

Le Shangri-La: A devastating technique which utilizes 5 of Lucy's other techniques that transition into an overhead attack with enough power to shatter even the Sea Stone Prism and harm very powerful users of armament haki

This are all of her physical offensive moves i could come up and also fix the problem of what arc they would be in cuz its very confusing for people who watch one piece
issei chapter 12 . 1/16
what the hell erza talking about she make me eww... can natsu and luffy fight aokiji
Lucy N.Dragneel chapter 12 . 1/16
Please keep updating...
ASL D Brothers chapter 11 . 11/8/2019
Awesome! The suspense is killing me! Straw Hats are going to kick Team Natsu's butts halfway across the world and show them how strong they are with their signature conviction, will power, raw strength, and skill. I look forward to the next chapter!
issei chapter 11 . 11/6/2019
good oppai
dragon5dragonblitz8 chapter 11 . 11/6/2019
super happy with the update and the direction it's going in
Lucy N.Dragneel chapter 11 . 11/5/2019
Yay...This Update made my day... Nice chapter...please keep updating...
Infinity Prime chapter 9 . 9/20/2019
¡Qué gran historia, sigue así, por far! ¡No puedo esperar al siguiente capitulo! (Por cierto, ¿a qué subgrupo pertenece la Ketsue Ketsue No Mi de Lucy: Paramecia o Logia?
Black Dragoniss chapter 9 . 9/13/2019
love the new chapter, yeah Lucy has a new family, can you do a chapter where it shows what's happening back in Fairy Tail?
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