A shame there isn’t more.

In response to Sakura's question, all I have to ask is another question.

What makes you worthy of salvation, and nobody else? The mother cries out for vengeance for her fallen son on the battlefield, yet Heaven stays silent. The man yells for justice even as he is falsely accused and executed, yet where is his justice? Millions of others have suffered worse than you have, and millions more will suffer still in the future. You were lucky enough to be saved, to see salvation where millions of others received nothing for their cries. So why then, are you yourself, worthy of salvation when weighed against millions of others?

Hope this gets continued.

I liked this one more then Divergent Fate! Glad we were able to see the servants before you stopped. Having Mordred is a nice change, and it would have been cool to see if you intended to characterize Assassin a bit more, but reading this was fun while it lasted. I really enjoy the way you write rider, and I love Medea as a character so it was cool seeing her take a more protagonist role here.

Hope you decide to continue at some point!

just a passing by reader, I stand by my honest opinion that Sakura is a mary sue and that's probably fine since this whole fanfiction was centered around the idea of Sakura getting a better deal in life, I also realized my dislike for Sakura while reading, but nevertheless, your story is awesome, had a fun ride reading

Liking the story. I finally found a fic where Maiya survives the War. But I'm pretty sure she's a mage taught what will make her a better assassin by Kiritsugu.

Is shirou still a 'hero' or does he no longer want to help others

...dafaq wuz dat, bub?

"No points for guessing who they summoned either."

Kaleid Illya?

There was a line that could be read as issei knowing about magic. If that is the case though, it's acceptable, though quite ambiguous. If not, it's just a bit misleading.

Well, realizing they not only shot themselves in the foot, but almost destroyed the world in trying to WIN a contest instead of realizing there original goal would give anyone a decency boost.

Oh boy... Mordred is Berserker... Poor Archer... Rin and Shirou at least got Saber. Good for them and everyone else in this story. I expect more. :)

Shirou's tracing ability steps:

Judging the concept of creation
Hypothesizing the basic structure
Duplicating the composition material
Imitating the skill of its making
Sympathizing with the experience of its growth
Reproducing the accumulated years
Excelling every manufacturing process

And the final eight steps: Molécula subatomic structure, you know... atoms.

Y'know. Considering how this is completely AU, there's nothing wrong with having the characters OOC.

Quite frankly, I'd prefer it if they were. The way the likes of Rin, Shirou and Sakura/Cattleya grew up is completely different, so it would stand to reason they wouldn't be like their canon counterparts.

To be honest, I like this sequel much more than the other one . I hope you keep updating this one.