Believable

Cute, fun, and realistic. Sounds like the sort of thing that could've happened in canon! Excellent job.

That was really awesome, and skilled to have developed a romance in so short a fic. ;)

I've really enjoyed this story. Pansy is so in character here, being mean to poor Neville, and he just wants to prove he's not as useless as she thinks he is. I like how once she realises this, she starts to be nicer to him and their friendship begins. Lovely story :)

Hey

This pairing was . . . unusual to say the least, but at the end of it, you've made it quite believable. We can truly see the evolution of their relationship and they manner in which they come around from being enemies to falling in love with the other, even if they haven't yet admitted it - we all know what couples who meet under 'premises' in the library truly feel for the other.

I admit that Snape must have had fun pairing the Slytherins with the Gryffindors . . . who knows, he probably paired Draco with Hermione and oh well, a Dramione shipper can dream, cant he?

Overall, I felt like this was a light hearted story that showed a lot of character development and I actually would love to read a sequel. I mean, the reactions of people seeing them as an item would be iconic.

And Neville is a pureblood so he's a suitable love interest for Pureblood Pansy Parkinson.

-Ciao Mate