a fuming pissed off leiko gogo tomago hissing shouting yelling at saying telling to her boyfriend DAMMIT HIRO HAMADA LET ME IN STOP PUSHING ME YOUR GIRLFRIEND AND YOUR FRIENDS AWAY I GAVE YOU THAT HUG BECAUSE I LOVE YOU

I like this story sadly cliffhanger well lad or lass what happens next

Good chapter! What was kind of ironic about it, is that I could totally see Hiro being indecisive like that.

But you no go for HiroGo? *tsk* j/k!

The anti-social reaction is just as good. Or should I say, the anti-social exterior hiding his silent pleas for help. Curious to see what he is up to next!

I am strangly attracted to this kind of stuff, most likely because I often struggle with my own mild anxiety and low-self esteem. I hated high school too.

This angle on Hiro is great. Makes him feel so much more real... I had wondered just what he could be thinking about that pulled him under. If it does help you cope, please keep writing. And also, know that you are important. Everyone is awesome for something!

Well Hiro I'm sure Go Go would be more than happy to give you that hug you want, she's pretty much the closest thing you're going to get to a big sister or maybe she'll become your girlfriend one day i don't know.

look the point is Go go and the others care about you, you want space and i can totally understand, but if you shut yourself out from the world around you. After a while you think people are pushing you away but the reality is that you make yourself become unapproachable.

I should know... it happened to me

Huh...so this is Hiro's thoughts of how he really feels right now. Quite emotional to be honest.

Anyway, keep it up! And I hope you update soon!

This seems like it will turn into a great story. Are you planning on making it a multi-chapter story? If so, I will continue to read it. It's really good.

At this point, it is depressing, but it was good so far. And I don't mind how dark or depressing this story is going to be, as long as it has a happy ending.

Keep it up! ;)

Make it as dark as you can/want to as long as it's well written and in character, which you do very well in this first chapter.
I love good drama and my favorite characters being psychologically tormented :)

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