As somebody who recently started to play Xenoverse 2 and has been looking for this story for quite a while after loosing track of it, it is a bit of a threat to read through it again. Especially given that there aren’t a ton of longer Xenoverse-stories.
But there are a few things that I feel needs to be said.
I think that the relationship between Aria and Paracyte is moving way too fast. They basically hook up within two chapters and immediately act like they’ve known each other for months, and this is made even worse by the (in my opinion) horrible inclusion of the tired ‘jealous girlfriend’-cliche.
Come on, did you really have to resort to something that tired and overused? You can write better than this!
At least I hope so, because there are good moments in there.
It has been a while since you’ve updated so I don’t want to discourage you from writing further, I just wanted to add my two cents on what could be improved for the future.

Adding to what I said in my last review, I’m going to say it because nobody else has the balls and courage to say it: your story sucks. I’m sorry but it’s the truth. It could be better but the fact that this wasn’t rewritten proves my point. No powerscaling at any point for your characters. That drags the story down tremendously. It started with your character forcing trunks into ssj. That to me shows the author having no sense of powerscaling whatsoever

Wow... trunks needs to go ssj, even though he could've tested her in his base form. And she can seemingly match him even in ssj. Im pretty sure this trunks is the same one from the future. Y' know? The same one who was able to somewhat match perfect cell and is as strong as his father during that time. And since we can assume this trunks continue to train, he would be stronger than ssj2 gohan during the cell games, and possibly achieving ssj2 along the way. So even though this is technically a test, she still should've gotten her ass handed to her.

I mean, lets throw all logic and powerscaling out the window and make her beat trunks in ssj even though it was a test and even though all facts clearly should have pointed her to her loss.

Another thing, why would she act friendly and, afterward, so trusting towards a guy who just suddenly says he wants to test her and then attack her? (a logical standpoint from her point of view or anybody would to be immediately suspicious, confused, and possibly angry towards why a man with a sword would attack her telling her it was a test). She instead shrugs (an unrealistic reaction from any person who is getting attacked by other person with a fucking sword) and says nothing, but the reaction just makes me think she's like "lol sure. Go right ahead."

Why no more. I need more. Your way of writing has affected me in a way I haven't seen in YEARS. Please continue this if you can.
I love the ship was well.

FOR THE SHHHIIIIIIIIIIIIIPPPP.

wow i started reading this expecting a Frost Demon MC yet that doesn't seem to be happening what a misleading cover

where's the other chapter's?

this chapter is so funny, good job Empress Oriana!

Aaaaah I'm freaking !That kissssss made me fangirl please!

AAAAHHH SAVAGE ARIA IN DA HOUSE!WOOP WHOOP

She's like Piccolo's out, P soon you'll have grandkids with purple and blonde hair

I love XenoVerse and I'm looking forward to this interesting storySure it'll be amazing!

Hey this is really good. I hope you continue this soon.

Hope you continue this! Frst demons are my favourite race in the db franchise and Im glad to see an oc one with a human romance!

I still like her with trunks though

I'd cry too