Reviews for Waiting
Guest chapter 1 . 9/22/2018
Would really like a second chapter to this.
Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 9/14/2018
Good story.
Magnusscipio chapter 1 . 7/21/2018
Lovely little tale, just humorous enough to prevent it being too fluffy. Superb as always, thank you.
Samantha chapter 1 . 7/8/2018
While I stress caution with issues such as content, language and legalities, more Harry/Hermione is a great thing.
Bluewolf80 chapter 1 . 11/30/2016
Very well written! I did think it odd that Hermione treated Harry's injuries as a muggle would. Getting him a wet cloth I can see, that's instinctual from growing up in the muggle world. It seems like a scourgify, transfigure a doily into a bandage to splint his finger, cooling charm on his hand and head then the dose of Skelegro would have been quicker and easier. Don't forget the Sober-Up potion too!

I loved the easy banter between the two. I was actually surprised at the revelation of Harry being a virgin as well and he had been waiting for the right girl. I finally got what the story was truly about like a doofus! It was a great way to weave it in and not just throw it out there in the beginning. Wonderful job!
Melanie chapter 1 . 11/13/2016
D'aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwww it's soooo fucking sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet!
amestoy chapter 1 . 3/7/2016
I liked it too much. The way you make drunk Harry has been tender and funny, and Hermione has been very kind and amusing too.
It's a pity you didn't wrote a second chapter, I would like to know what happened after Hermione's bold try to 'seduce' Harry.
Thx for writing.
Shani8 chapter 1 . 9/20/2015
Wonderfully written. Thanks so much for this gem of a story. Well done! :)

-Shani :)
ankaush chapter 1 . 8/9/2015
one of the most canon-realistic versions of harmony. good job!
texan-muggle chapter 1 . 8/2/2015
This one could maybe do with a 2nd chapter too...
herart chapter 1 . 6/3/2015
Very good story. So true, too. I, for one, would have liked to know what happened next, you know, Harry waking up and the consequent talk, with a bit of convincing from Hermione, possibly. I did already imagine that.
EndlessChains chapter 1 . 4/18/2015
A well done story. This was just the most romantic and endearing read. Learning the history of Ron and Hermione was a good start until Harry made his appearance. To learn about the relationship that Harry and Hermione have even though not a couple was well done as well as good to know. The conversation they have about Harry dating others but couldn't find the right was was hilarious due to his reasons but endearing when he said they weren't Hermione and that he was waiting. Hermione's revelations about herself waiting was well done and showed they did love each other but never approached the idea. Thank you. Keep up the good work.
Lanzecki chapter 1 . 4/11/2015
Sweet. Nice. Well done!
RonRR chapter 1 . 3/24/2015
The way things should have been.

Thanks for writing,

Ron
Guest chapter 1 . 3/16/2015
Awwww... This was tender and just lovely. Thank you for sharing it with us. :)
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