Reviews for Naruto Chimera Effect
Guest chapter 5 . 7/5
worst fic ever don't read
kirosyamcha chapter 5 . 6/25
ehh keep issei but make him less important? or something along that line.
kirosyamcha chapter 1 . 6/25
kushina could have become a devil to survive? also a few spelling errors .
thegrison chapter 16 . 6/15
Good but your lemon needs work. 99% of all lemon writers make a mistake in the womb would only expand a little bit before it would fill the tubes going to the ovaries. Then it would fill up and would break the connection to them before any more expanding of the womb would happen. That would be very painful and could be life threatening.
Kraizy chapter 1 . 6/6
Just let naruto kill rias already..
Guest chapter 26 . 5/17
More please
FriggleBerry chapter 3 . 4/29
The grammar is kinda rough. So many words are misspelled or in the wrong spots it makes it a pain to read. I just wish the quality of naruto fics was higher, out of every fandom I’ve read naruto by far has the overall lowest quality compared to smaller ones
cartoncikisrouhg chapter 24 . 3/27
Wow... Talking about being insane, when you casually killed all type of people and insane too... And yeah, I see why freed turn out even more crazy, she is mc of series when he is side character, and only because she got lucky... Yeap, you make me pitty a freed of all people...
cartoncikisrouhg chapter 23 . 3/27
Wow... What kind of stupidity you bring upon this cursed land? If original idea of kokabiel was stupid but at least work... Now it's just shitfest. Great job!
cartoncikisrouhg chapter 21 . 3/27
Yeah-yeah... Actually girl around 18 already ultimate class, and tayuya very strong succubus... And you logic is very strong too!
cartoncikisrouhg chapter 20 . 3/27
The power levels all over the place, all you non-canon characters randomly buffed without any thoughts behind it. And Naruto himself inconsistent as he is strange... I wouldn't mind it, but thats not a proper story telling, you buff random character, you give some shitty explanation, that goes even more badly, because most of the time we could see from pov of the said character (yep, I wasn't fighting with my all, because she is not serious-trying to kill him with her life on life) just write some time later, that she Train or something, don't use all the time excuses and shitty shounen logic...
cartoncikisrouhg chapter 15 . 3/9
Wow... A great words... Far too great for only high class beach.
cartoncikisrouhg chapter 14 . 3/9
So you tell me, that you gonna do a Canon fight with this trash of fried chicken... Why? And yes, if he in his *importantpower up would struggle against very weak high class of devil... Then you badass* thoughts was even worst then original work...
cartoncikisrouhg chapter 13 . 3/9
13 of very strange chapters and this guy still useless... You try really hard to make it seems like her really make some progress, but in the end, he is basically even weaker then issei when he fought raiser... GREAT JOB!
KINGShaheed chapter 5 . 2/4
Okay.. Maybe I was wrong about you :)
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