| Reviews for The Beginning of A Lengend |
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   Lunar Moon Butterfly chapter 6 . 6/8 Interesting concept you have here. Keep it up! |
| charmanderpika chapter 2 . 3/23 I don't like Misty but otherwise good story |
| Hikaru the Moth chapter 1 . 3/30/2018 A good idea, you just need proper grammar and punctuation |
| kristinalprime23 chapter 5 . 1/26/2018 nice chapter I wanna see more please. |
| kristinalprime23 chapter 6 . 12/24/2017 i wanna see more of this story please update. |
| Lemoninja18 chapter 6 . 8/26/2017 Are you still updating? |
| B Is Da Beast chapter 6 . 8/1/2017 lol. police balls. keep it coming |
| Fine chapter 6 . 6/14/2017 conttinue this plz |
| Vedant328 chapter 6 . 2/5/2017 Don't abandon story like others , I too much like the idea of chosen one ash as arceus's son , I would love to read till the end |
| Derpidot chapter 3 . 11/7/2016 My gosh this is so badly written. Get a beta or something man, I like the story but it's such an eyesore. Heck, I'd be willing to beta it. |
| Guest chapter 6 . 9/9/2016 OML STOP LEAVING CHAPTERS UNFINISHED IT DRIVES ME CRAZY |
| Edmonton58 chapter 6 . 9/4/2016 my guess is that you have writers block for this story, but the next chapter would be aj and pokemon tech. |
| TekExplorer chapter 6 . 5/17/2016 :/ need moar |
| Gothicfantasy chapter 6 . 12/12/2015 I like your books. They tend to run through the events but I like the story a lot. I would let be to see what happens next. |
| macbean84 chapter 6 . 12/12/2015 this is a good story but i think you are rushing it a bit. take more time in writing it and give more details and you can make this story a lot better. |
