This is such a cool story! I love the lore you came up with and used as you explored cores and obsessions and how they work. Danny's relationship with his friends and siste and how they treat him is chillingly messed up and very unexpected. I've read the story where Danny gets taken in by Clockwork or another ghost because of his bad home situation but it's almost always Jack and Maddie who are the problem and the two of them being horrified and wanting to change was refreshing. Also Clockwork adopting Danny is so cute and I love it do much. When Dani showed up, it made me so happy. And Clockwork's conversation with Dan and trying to help him, that was really cool.
I hope you continue this and show what happens when Danny wakes up. I would love to see his reaction to everything, especially Dan. Some cute bonding with Dani would be great. And an eventual visit with Jack and Maddie would be cool too.

Hi I like this story and the idea of ghost classes. Do you have a list or something for that?

My heart is dying right now like really dying it hurts inside thank you clockwork

Love the story. I wonder if Danny going to be okay like when he wakes up he will be back to normal or he will have it like a mental and emotional damaged like he cannot fully recover from it has to be defended on Clockwork for a long or he's like stuck in a child's mind way to cope? Or something like that love the story please write more

This is one of my favorite DP fanfics that I have ever read. The Fenton family fallout, the ghost zone worldbuilding, freakin' Clockwork's character!, it's beautiful and I love all of it.

A nice story so far, keep up the good work.

Could you update this please I really like this one and find it very interesting and have recently finished re reading it for the second time

This Jazz need to be exorcised, burned on a stake and locked in the seventh circle of Hell for what she did to Danny! And what is Dan's new sub-class?

Hi visitor here,

I love the direction of the storyline you have going here, when will you update again I’d love to know how it progresses from here?!

Thank you for your time

Hi. I know it's been a while since you updated this. I found this when I was doing one of my searches for somewhat random words coupled with "Danny Phantom" and "fanfiction". The word I was using when I found this was "coma".

You did a really good job with this story. I have recently been craving positive interactions between the ghosts and Danny (Skulker in particular). This gave me exactly what I was looking for.

(Spoilers for story ending)
I really liked how Clockwork found Dani and gave Dan another chance. You also made it so that Vlad changed for the better. I tend to really like fics where that happens (believably). You had a slightly different idea in this than anything else I have read in this fandom, and I really enjoyed being allowed to explore it through your writing. Thanks.

I know it's been a long time, but can I hope you one day return to this story. I was re-reading this for nostalgia, and I really, really, REALLY want to know how it ends.

Heya! I guess this won't be updated anymore or something like that, but I still wanted to tell you how enraptured I had been by this fic.
So, to be honest, I thought this fic wouldn't be up to my taste. Like, the reviews were "just" 200 and it didn't really appealed to me that much. However, I still tried it out. 95% of fics here are trash, but your fic.. I really loved it. Like, I was surprised with myself! It was so simple, but at the same time, so complex! I loved the (subtle or not so subtle) manipulation, the logic behind the class category system, the descend to ehhh, not madness, but to destruction. I felt with Danny and I felt with the ghosts. Welp, or maybe I just love angsty stuff or whatever, but what I want to say is, thank you for this fic. It was or is beautifully written, even with some mistakes lol. And even though Danny might never wake up again, 'cuz the fanfiction's on hiatus (for forever or something) I honestly enjoyed the concept you showed me. Showed us. Keep up your work if you still write fic's! Adieu! ;)

Could you update this? It’s really good. I love the classes bit.

please please please more. i love this story so far.

I was wondering what all the other ghost are doing or thinking about frostbite, Pandora, ember and all the others about Danny situation perhaps you can write about their POV and see how their handling everything also what going on with Sam and Tucker. I really enjoy reading your story can't wait for the next chapter