So... you killed Ryouga just so you could create extra family to avenge him... Weird AU choices, tbh. Can see what everyone else meant by dark though, if this is gonna be the tone going forward.

Eh. See you in a chapter or two. Hope ranma at the very least steals that Iron Cloth technique.

Im guessing Ranma was raped by Ryouga? And didn't recover from Nekoken as he did in cannon?

Interesting start. Been told this story's dark, but so far I quite approve. ;p

I need one more chapter, just one more, maybe years later? I need it please...

Good story, although now I want to find something lighthearted with ranma in it, just so he can beat up this one in my head. Wonder what happened to happosai

Terrifying. Suspenseful. Amazing.

The characters, the scenes, the pacing, the symbolism. It's all great.

Honestly, I thought it was setting it up so that Kasumi poisons him. There was a mention of dinner being weird and Kasumi openly admitting he was psychotic.

Still. Great writing. Dark and smooth like the best kind of chocolate.

This was one terrifying story... Good, but terrifying.

Ahhhh it's so dark. I love it but such a contrast to the light heartedNess of ranma.

Haha pretty dark. At first I thought Ranma might just be a bit broken not down right malevolent. This was the first chapter showing how cruel and evil he is. Held me in suspense and also left a bit of a bad taste with what almost happened.

This has to be one of... no, THE strangest Ranma fanfic I have ever read. Also, heartwrenching and very well-written. Gods, I don't WANNA love this fic but I do...

I haven't read this story in years! Hopefully it will be rediscovered by a new generation of Ranma 1/2 fans.

Wow... Just wow... Utterly fantastic and shocked me to the brim, especially the ending. At the beginning when you said the stuff about the Au's being most often or not better than cannon is just... The ending man, The ending...

This is such a fantastic dark story.
Awesome work, I already read it some time ago.
Thank you for bringing it here.
The only con is the text format, like, some quotes on bold or italics, and making clear the email texts or the Ranma notes, or the disclaimer.

A fantastic story, couldn't put it down. Very suspenseful - while I guessed it was the Neko-ken early on, I didn't know what Ranma had done/thought until the end - I guessed, but there were so many conflicting signals... which was because they were true (like killing Nabiki then trying to save her). Very well wrapped and written, and you had true character growth. I wish I could point to a specific example, but all your characters were well done - perhaps Akane, but that's only because I normally *don't* like her, and you did her character just as well as Ranma, the Kibikis, Genma, Nabiki, Shan...
Utterly fantastic, 10/10

Aw... When you started with "I was saved at the last minute" from Mariko there, I was sure it would be a "Hudson Hawk" spoof!
Akane: But how did you survive the fall?
Mariko: Airbags hidden in the floor, can you believe it?
Akane: But how did you climb out of the mine shaft?
Mariko: Rope ladder hidden in the wall, can you believe it?
Akane: But what about the fires?
Markio: Sprinkler system hidden in the ceiling, can you believe it?
Akane pauses for a moment, then looks to the camera... "I can believe it."