Reviews for Check and Mate |
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![]() ![]() ![]() What a beautiful, well-written story! I really liked how there’s always a parallel to Shogi for situations in Shikamaru’s mind and I thought you wrote that excellently. I really loved this story. |
![]() ![]() Beautifully written. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it! It was really well written. Thank you! |
![]() ![]() More like a review of all the chapters... You had me laughing, smiling, whispering 'so cute', grinning, feeling my heart melt and occasionally a bit horny. Some of these at the same time. The story was very well written and executed, and I liked the fact that you expanded the characters in territories we haven't seen them before without actually changing them so much. I have searched for shikatema fanfiction for a while now, because I am an addict, but can't say I had read one that felt rather realistic within the world of naruto, while keeping the characters believable. The characterization was spot on, with some extra flare of creative rights. Now that I think about it, I haven't read many fanfiction about any couple that felt so natural. Keep up the great work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() One of my favorites, thank you! |
![]() ![]() Amazing story! One of my favorites, thank you so much! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow... Just wow! Its really great.. I dont think i find another shikatema fic to fav.. Sequel please.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh my fucking god. I loved it. the story was fluid and well written. the transitions from point of view were near flawless. the description was beautiful and daring. the characters were on point and completely in was funny and tense and amazing. I absolutely loved it. thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Quite good. Really every aspect was well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() If you didn't win that contest then it is a sign that people no longer recognize a FANTASTIC story when they see one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Right when I thought it was getting good, it suddenly took a turn of 180 |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't help but laugh like a virgin when reading this |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't know you personally or something but I can't help but imagine your persona writing a masterpiece and squealing whilst doing so. Shikamaru slayed it, I love this so much |
![]() ![]() ![]() At one point in the story, Temari challenged shikamaru to dance. I was so scared that he'd suddenly drop psy moves. But God... That dance was hotter than what I've read lately |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not as a necklace, please not xD |