Daaaaaaaaaaamn
was not expecting that
so basically dipper will become bill and go back in time to make sure dipper becomes bill again
like a time loop.
and the last part was:
YOU DON'T HAVE A CHOICE WILLIAM

This is really awesome. I can tell that you planned it out well, and I LOVE the idea of dark Dipper, haha. Nice work!

Dipper is actually Bill, or... his incarnation in the physical world? Something like that is really frightening. But boy, it would be so darn exciting to see.

Woooaahhh. *looks at reviews for answers* Man I don't get this. It was so ambiguous...so jarring, frustratingly confusing! But that was the point for this fic, I think. To create the sense of confusion that Dipper was feeling. I kinda like the idea how Dipper is slowly falling into insanity and obsession with the journals to the point where Bill can manipulate him. That means...evil Dipper. *dun dun dUUUNNNnn* Haha, all jokes aside, this was very well written!

This is the most absorbed I've been while reading something in a while.
I don't read much, but still.
The italics was the dream, right? It was woven in amazingly. This whole thing was written amazingly, I think.

"You don't have a choice"
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WILLIAM.

...Well, that IS an ambitious theory - one that you tackled quite nicely. It started out with a simple "twin-comforts-twin" plot and evolved into much more. Thanks very much for writing this, I greatly enjoyed it!

This is in depth. Glad I took the time to read it all.