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This was an enchanting tale. You moved forward at a great pace, kept the flow and had the perfect about of cute and aww. Well done.

Aww...thank you for sharing your writing talent.

Hmm...still not sure I agree with Charlie. Speaking of going back to class, is Jake still next to her in class? Is HE the one who bumped into Angela?

Oh no, Edward will leave in the future :-(

I swear if I'm ever proposed to and I don't feel anything close to what I felt reading that proposal I'm saying No.

Beautiful. So romantic. Thank you for sharing.

This is just too corny and unbelievable for me. Silly names. This reunion. Ugh.

This premise of a mangled voice mail and then refusing to read ANY email is very thin. Not sure I find it believable.

Awwww, that was beautiful. I love that she posed again with Angela, just for him. I laughed when she said she's got the only copy of the pictures on her USB stick. His photo album to her was wonderfully romantic. His proposal perfect. I loved this story. Thank you so very much for sharing your imagination with us here. xo ~Christy

This was a fun chapter. I liked the mini time jump. They've been spending some nights together and they've certainly taken advantage of the nights alone, and more. Their love has grown and they seem so very happy. Which makes me very happy. Yay! Liked the closure with Leah. Really loved that she is going with him up to Alaska this time! Yay! Sad to let these two go but, I've definitely loved the journey. Onto the epi . . .

That was absolutely perfect. It was placed perfectly in the story. They shared their lust, desire and love with each other fully. I adored that she wore that bra and pants set, just for him. He nearly lost it, just by looking at her. Very wonderful, and very realistic, first time. I really liked that you didn't write her having pain. Not all of us did, our first times. When you're ready, you're ready. And, you wrote him not lasting. Very realistic. Loved the whole chapter., as it was very well written.

With the way she's not been getting along with Charlie lately, she should've gone home with Edward. Met Alice and Jasper, had Christmas with the Cullen's. I love that he came home to be with her on NYE. And, I adored the way they finally admitted that they love each other.

I'm elated that I was wrong and that it wasn't Leah that had the USB stick. At least it was Riley, a shy man in Emmett's frat house. Thank goodness that Emmett recognized that it was Bella! I'm thinking he may have figured it out by her necklace as well? So glad they got it back from Riley and that he deleted them from his hard drive too. Her payback to Angela, Ben and Edward was scary and fun at the same time. I'm happy that Angela and Bella are okay now.

That was a really lame excuse, Charlie. It was so many kinds of fucked up and he caused so much more damage to her, than Edward ever would've. Not his decision to make. Never was. Yet he did it anyway. I'd be severely pissed for a very long, long time. Hate him? No. Remain angry with him? Absolutely.