Biff(butch) has dark green hair well james has blue hair

Is ash still going to get bulbasaur and squritle

Nice chapter and the catches.

It was great.

Here is a idea to tell the differences between Ash's Pokémon and Dawn's Pokémon why not have one of them give them nicknames or add something to them so they can tell who's is who.

What do you think?

AWESOME Dude

I LOVED IT!

HERE IS A IDEA:

How abut at the end of a chapter you tell the people what Pokémon each trainer has and what their attack are.

what do you think?

Wow this is such a great story! Your writing style is awesome! I love the fact that charmander is ash's starter. Keep on writing! :-)

Wow.

Nice chapter.

I am shocked that James was not with Jessie and Meowth and that Butch and Cassidy are friends with Jessie.

Not bad.

Can ya have Ash and Dawn get a Beedrill?

Great chapter

Nice chapter dude

I don't know who belongs with Ash: Dawn or Serena.