Beautiful story. I really enjoy it. Just wish Sasuke could get pregnant. I prefer the version not edited on AO3 :)
Thank you

I loved this story so much!

Wonderful read but it ended way too quickly (the sudden ending caught me off guard).

~Aweeeeee This one is soooo sweeet and warm. I absolutely love it. :)

Thank you.

This story has been a joy to read.

Ah, have no fears. This was an excellent chapter. I enjoyed it immensely. It was a added bonus to learn of Naruto'a past being a Jinchurriki. This brought a good bit of spice to the story. But I understand about writing dialog. I'm writing a story were I've had to rewrite the same lines over for one reason or another. The worst is trying to write a group of people speaking. Instead of just two.

Anyhow, great writing!

Love this story :)
They are soo adorable :)

This story is amazing and I've loved it ever since I discovered it. The detail and emotion you put into your stories is admirable and I'm so glad I found your account :) In my own opinion, I think your story could go either way, you could leave it where it is and add an epilogue (which is what I would probably do) or you could go on with the story talking about struggles in Sasuke 's relationship and/or life as Co-ruler. I don't believe it could go wrong either way with your ability so I'd say it really depends on what you feel you want to do with the story. Don't feel obligated to write more if you don't see anything more for it :)

I'm quite content for the ending to be here. My reasoning is that if the writer has told his or her story. Then what is there left to say? I hate rambling. Rambling always ends up making no sense after a while.

I enjoyed this story alot. And I fully intent to keep it on my favorite list. Because I will read this one again. As far as the sex scenes go. I'll be honest. Sasuke was in a somewhat abusive situation. It may not have been sexual abuse. But it still causes fear and and insecurities. Naruto would have needed to take things slowly with Sasuke. If he would have forced Sasuke then things would have gotten very bad. Sometimes you just have to wait for someone. The scene at the end of this chapter didn't upset me in the least. Because I tend to dwell more on the heart of the relationship. Rather then the sex itself. It all means more when the couple has loving, caring, and respectful relationship.

Great writing!

This chapter was really worth the wait, I'm happy not to have given up on this story (_)
I really like the way you describe the little details, you make the reader believe he's a part of the story. And your writing style is so good and simple, it makes it easy to understand (even if english is my third language and i don't speak it well) So thank you so much for this chapter. I eagerly awaits the next!

This is so good! I was completely bawling at the end, I can't even imagine how awful Sasuke must feel :( I'm really looking forward to the next chapter though, 'cause this one totally made my day (you should've seen me when I got the update email, I had a total fangirling session XD) You're such an amazing writer and I can't wait to see what you have in store for the wedding! 'Hope you update soon~! :3

I like this story very much. Personally I think that things are going a little faster, but in a good way, you're not rushing, It's like every chapter is like a day. You keep the details sharp, I can picture the images of how you describe certain environments, almost feeling them.

I'm looking forward towards the new chapter

This chapter has been well worth the wait. I loved every moment of it. The end was a bit surprising though I guess I should have seen it. Since Fugaku, was rather uncaring and harsh to Sasuke. I'm glad that he is with Naruto now.

Hey great job. And thank you too!

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That ending though! Givin me feels and shit. Tbh you should write a book

aww this update made my day. I so loved this chapter, it was soo cute and heartwrenching as well cause of the end. Naruto is so gentle and very caring, I really loved the part when he knew about Sasuke's turmoil and comforted him. And Sasuke, I truly feel sorry for him, so glad he found Naruto by his side to help him with what he's going through.
Thanks again for the chapter, and see yu until the next update.