Reviews for When Four Became Three
Guest chapter 2 . 11/4/2019
What do you mean grey in his hair? In fact why does everyone say that? In canon when harry meets him he has a couple of grey hairs that from the sound of it were a recent appearance and had only shown up in the last year or so. He was young! Harry oblivious Potter notices several times throughout the series how young ( but tired) he looks. In the third book I've imaged him as BBC's sherlock at around the empty hearse(with lighter hair) that sherlock has premature lines on his face as well . the point I'm making is that in your story and throughout canon he is a young man and should be described accordingly, though I do admit he is a differcult character to write and describe- he is so complex, and what we know of him was what harry saw, which was for the most part a super awesome genius teacher
Kelly-YZ chapter 7 . 7/7/2018
I love it! It's a great story.
h0neybunny16 chapter 7 . 6/20/2018
I really like this story :D plsssssssssssssssssssssss update soon
MoonytheMarauder1 chapter 1 . 10/7/2017
I loved it! Truly amazing!
LemurGirl chapter 7 . 7/5/2017
Oh my gosh, this is such a good story! I was honest-to-goodness sobbing when I read the last chapter.
Guest chapter 7 . 12/31/2015
Absolutely amazing! Thnx
Will there be more stories after a new normal?-btw I loved that story and the trial of Peter pettigrew too
Guest chapter 7 . 12/30/2015
Thank you for an amazing story
️ Your works
Loves to read books chapter 7 . 11/10/2015
Brill story. Keep up the great work!
firewordsparkler chapter 7 . 5/11/2015
This was such an interesting fic! I love the idea of Remus and Sirius saving Lily and James after realizing Peter betrayed them.
Saissa chapter 4 . 4/16/2015
Why in the world did Padfoot trust that stupid git rat?

even I would never trust a rat - or a snake.
Guest chapter 7 . 4/13/2015
Honestly, I wasn't expecting to like this. Other AU Halloweens that I've read have all seemed really fake... all except this one, that is! It was wonderful and realistic and absolutely brilliant. Thank you for writing! I can't wait to read The Trial of Peter Pettigrew and all of your future stories.

I'm obsessed with the Marauders as well ;)
D-T chapter 7 . 4/8/2015
Thank you for this unique idea. I truely enjoyed your story. Your style is good and mostly fluent. I would be very interested in the new home life and dynamic of the Potters with Sirius and Remus.
Especially regarding Peters trial and the fact that the marauders and Lily became the vanquisher of Voldemort. Seeing as a werewolf and a Black were involved in his defeat could have an interesting impact on wizarding society.
On another note... will Lily and snape reconcile, when Lily hears he became a spy for the light. How would the boys react? And speaking of boys... If you are up to it... Maybe more Baby Harry scenes? With his parents and uncles :-o :-)
Keep up the good work
D-T
lunaz chapter 7 . 4/8/2015
thank you for a great story, I look forward to the next chapter
Iris Stardust chapter 7 . 4/10/2015
This was great story. :)
Diddleymaz chapter 7 . 4/9/2015
Good story
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