This story got dark asf but it was a genuine pleasure to read. I love how well the Knights looked after him and you managed to expand the story past Camelot. It was very well written and damn if it didn't make me hurt. I adore this book and your writing.

Augggh this is so well done, you had me from the first paragraph. Keep up the good work

Well written!

Quit apologizing! Your so called skips are right in line with the story and actually give more to the POV of the characters.

Alright now that I said that I’m gonna continue binge reading...

Lol :p can u add a little chapter about the walk lol

Sad but great job

God bless

Oh my! I thought I'm gonna die of laughter when the Lord reavealed his name, cause you know, here in Poland we have a classic adventure series featuring legends and haunted castles and there is a ghost of Brunhilde there, only Brunhilde is a woman, and it's generally a woman a name, and oh god, if this ain't btilliant! _

Great story. Not many good Gwaine/Metlin bromance stories. Loved the whole confrontation scene with both Lancelot and Gwaine trying to protect Merlin's secret.
Would have loved an epilogue sometime set in the future of perhaps "Emrys" returning to the magical lord and giving him a little just desserts and freeing the rest of the slaves, maybe with a little help from a rougue knight in disguise. ;)
Anyway enjoyed the story immensely and I pity poor Arthur now that Gwaine noes Merlin's secret!

I liked this! I also really liked how ou included the fact that Merlin would be suffering from some form of PTSD, and it was just overall very good.

This story was really brilliant! Youre a great writer! Poor merlin, but well done!

Excellent

"Half a fortnight" is a really awkward way of saying a week, especially since there is already an archaic term for a period of seven days, (a sennight.)

Wow that was an amazing story! I seriously could not stop reading it at all. So wonderful. Definitely added to my favorite list.

Brilliant. What a roller coaster ride of emotions. The despair of Merlin's suffering and nightmares. The joy of his magic returning - and what a wonderful scene that was with both Gwaine and Lancelot desperate to protect him. Then the return trip and the decline in his health once more.
The reunion with Hunith and Gaius was heart warming (and yes I did get a little misty eyed) on his return to Camelot.
A wonderful story, beautifully written and one I will read again. Many, many thanks.

The only thing I would have liked more, would have been a lil more on Merlin's reaction to being raped.
Otherwise I LOVED this, was an excellent read and amazingly written. I love most of ur stories, exactly the things I enjoy reading, u do it brilliantly :D

I cannot wait until ur amazing mind comes up with its next master piece :D :) :P

Keep up the fantastic work and u shall most likely hear from again :)