Great story!

This story and olso not human were so great! Like i cant belive, so gratefull i found them! I guess there arent many storys thought Touya perspective, but he is such an interesting character! Like the first time Yue appeared he was sudenly there saying "yeah... i knew he wasnt human.." and i am like what ? ExPlaIn, so i am glad you could extend over thighs like that. Thanks for sharing!

Great story! I really enjoyed this perspective!

Well, why can I said ? I did loved each one of your Toya/Yukito, so well written and still very IC :)
Thank you !

This was so good. . thank you, just loved watching the anime as a child. Just got done watching them again and wanted to see if anyone else was fond of these two young men as I was. So happy there is! lol

I devoured this fic in one sitting. It was nice to see the overlap with not human but from touyas point of view

This is very beautifully written and complete... the characterization is wonderful. Going off to read Not Human now... XD

I loved this story. I must admit though, I cheated and read this one before Not Human. Speaking of, does the unedited version of Not Human still exist somewhere? I couldn't find it on your homepage.

Well that was quite an ending.

I like how you did the confession scene between Touya and Yukito. I'm guessing that things were ironed out a bit more between Touya and Yue later on, when they got to know each other a bit better.

Touya's reaction to Kaho and him actually telling her how much the extremely sudden break up with little or no explanation hurt is always a plus. It was an odd bit, even in the cannon storyline. And, silly as it sounds, I'm glad Eriol wasn't really in this. He's not my favorite character by any means. heh So yeah, I enjoyed this being all about Touya and Yukito, with some Yue.

It was cute and I absolutey loved the part where Touya shoved Ruby Moon out the door. She got so annoying after a while.

So overall, it was an excellent fanfic. It was a nice read for a quiet summer afternoon. Good job.

Okay, you pretty much had me at the first line. I was laughing for a minute or two over that one. 'How many flavors can my denial come in?' haha Nice! And terribly original.

So far you've managed to tell a pretty good story without overdoing it with the detail. I like straight to the point stories. So yeah, thanks for not going on about hair and clothing every few minutes. XD

I'm really impressed with the dialogue and this story's closeness to cannon, while keeping its own tone and rhythm. Nice job. Yukito's personality, particularly with this kind of depth of explanation, is very interesting indeed. I'm really enjoying this nice bit of fanservice so far. ;)

Well that was a cute first chapter. I like how Touya's aware of 'fate' and how it's messing with him. XD

The ironic thing is, most people think Yukito/Yue was 'fated' to fall for Sakura instead of Touya. Just fandom bits, we're not sure if it's cannon or anything. I just found it amusing how everything eventually worked out. heh Besides, Clow meddled a bit too much. There being a flaw in one of his plans is always a plus. Shakes things up a bit.

Anyway, this chapter was very well written. I knew exactly what was going on and where it was going. Nice job.

This is beautiful, thank you for your time and effort!

I read both Not Human and this fanfic, and I must say I love your writing _ Your stories are just beautifully written, I can't say more than that! I enjoyed spending my morning reading this.

Joby

that was beotiful! i loved the ending too, \0/ cheers for TamChronin for this wonderful fic! i also read the one from Yuki's POVv before this.. both were awesome! *throws confetti* ~tan ta na nan~

finally they are together~ hahaha