Enjoyed the story - - thanks for sharing it

A catheter won't do anyone any good if they need to have a bowel movement. Just an FYI. I also dont like how that 'doctor' handled Maura. I hope that doesnt happen regularly in USA hospitals or any hospital for that matter.

Angela interfere's far too much in things that arent her concern. I know you'll say something like 'her heart is in the right place' but if that was me I couldnt handle that at all. She should learn to back off. Having a daughter who knows how to use a gun could prove dangerous lol

I'm team Maura & Jane. I hate Jack Armstrong with a passion. If Maura was to have a romantic relationship with a man I would rather it was Ian Faulkner rather than that weasle Jack. We all know though that the relationship should be with Jane.

Please do write a sequel. Too good a story to leave it there
Thanks for sharing.

Read this in one sitting. Loved it! I thought Jane would have been a little more..."pissy" upon Maura's return, and she would have been well within her rights. However it was still an enjoyable read and I am eager to read the sequel. Thanks for sharing, cheers xk64x: )

Fookin hell gal. This was one amazin story. Fookin brill. On 2 the sequel

You have captured the friendship they once had . Beautiful!

yo por mas que quiera a maura si fuera jane en esta historia no se la dejaria facil despues de todo lo que le a echo

Fantastic job with this story you wrote it just right nice build up to the story . Sorry you had to remove comments from your site some people just love to be horrible to others and can't seem to believe its fiction . I for one think you have done brilliant with this story and I can't wait to read the sequel . Xxxx

Just started reading your story and it is fantastic love these girls the hospital scene was so great jane answer to the doctor was funny can't wait to read the rest well done so far xx

This was a wonderful story even though it was not rizzles, it was full of love. I loved it

Oh my God I loved this story! So much that I didn't realise I had been reading for 3 hours solid until my phone rang! The only little thing I have to say was that I got a bit confused what was happening when Maura had the second seizure. I got straight back into it but was bemused for a little while! Great otherwise :-)

Oh gosh, this is heartwrenchingly sad.

I'm completely enthralled - love your writing style!