Hi! Loving this story! You really should fix the excerpt / abstract for your story? A well written one would gain you way more readers n the reviews you deserve!

Hi! I have read almost all the AR fanfics n have to tell you that your story is AWESOME! One of, if not the best I've read! I can't wait to see where you take this. Will Alex and team use his fame in the spy world to rally the troops n show them the truth about Blunt; capture him n stop Scorpia will Ben confront Mia? Will Tom n Eve show how far they have come in the battle (after some more training of course). Will Wolf n snake contact the SAS command in secret, those trusted in Govt to show the truth n gain support? Will Ben become the new Head n let Alec n Co train only but otherwise be normal school kids or will Alex Tom n Eve live at the SAS n have a a teacher there for a mini school in safety? Will Alex one day return to be a Spy or in the SAS. I can't wait! So many possibilities n so much excitement! Thank you so much for a great read n keep up the great work! :)

These chapters are awesome, sorry i haven't reviewed in ages. I love the fact that you are putting songs in them, because it goes really well. I hope you update soon.

I love your story. It really made me laugh. I especially love Bens and Alex's 'bromance' :P
And the torture scene was also pretty good. I love the whole 'ribena' idea.
You have balanced this story really well with adventure, humor, sarcasm, romance etc which had made the story really interesting.
Umm maybe you could continue Alex's and Eve's story. Not too cheesy. Maybe something cute and funny? I would love to read that! :)

Hi! I think the summary looks great and draws attention to the story. I also really like the lines you used, they are definitely creative and eye catching! Thanks for the recognition of my idea by the way, it really made my day. I can't wait to continue reading this story to see what happens to Eve, Alex, Tom, and the rest of the "gang"(or should I say unit).

You don't plan out your story? Yikes lol

This is a good story! And honestly coming from a reader's POV your description/summary is intriguing, I know it made me want to read the story! But maybe you could instead of like having it all from one scene have the sentences come from different chapters but string them together to make it sound cool. Like how in movie trailers they string things together to make it seem more interesting, do you get where I'm trying to go with this?

Oh I loved this. I found it perfectly balanced betwween funny and serious. I hope you can update soon!

This chapter was overall pretty good, but a bit unrealistic, the running portion specifically. It would not be that easy for two typical teenagers to run 7 km, especially not 12 km. I get that Alex would be in better shape than them, but not to that extent. He is not a track star. To put it in perspective: I am a typical teenager with no track experience, and I can run 5 km (~3 mi) in 27 minutes. Alex would probably be around 15-20 minutes for 5 km. And that was very exhausting for me, I probably couldn't do much more than that. So, try to keep the endurance of the kids in mind, and the fact that they do not have exemplary strength. Give Alex a bit of leeway, but not a ridiculous amount. Everything else was very good, and I can't wait to read more!

Hey I love this chapter. I would love to see A lex fight K unit and kick their assess. Also some paintballing would be fun. Cannot wait until your next chapter, so I hope you can update soon! THANKS!

Merde*
Je ne t'aime pas*

Hey this is going awesome. I love the plot and I cannot wait until your next update.

I really liked that you gave a simple code for the reader to figure out.

It was just really confusing for me in the beginning because I'm german and we have our keyboard in another order. But i googled a picture of an english keyboard and from there on had it decoded quite fast.

Nice story btw ;)

Okay, that clears up quite a bit, just like I thought this chapter would! Good job for updating so quickly, I have no idea how you do it! It's miraculous, and I absolutely love it, because it means I get to read your story more often!

Woah! That was so good! Not sure if the torture scene really happened or if it was a nightmare of something, but I guess we will find out in the next chapter huh? I'm thinking it was real, but you never know.
One piece of advice: be aware of how much description vs how much action there is in your story. The description post-torture was good, but there were some other areas where things moved too quickly and were hard to picture. Try to use all 5 senses. It will help with chapter length too!