So, is Ragnar Captain Marvel, or is Captain Marvel a separate person? I got a little confused, but overall, a great story. You've made me a (sort of) Yu-Gi-Oh!, Fairy Tail, Avatar:the Last Airbender, and Avengers fan. Cheers!

So many errors.
But good chapter.

You know Camicazi and Thuggory would've been great additions to the team.
Camicazi could've been Captain/Ms. Marvel, and Thuggory could've been in the Black Panther or an another role.
And in my opinion, Minden would be a cute love interest for Snotlout.

He's gonna have to tell them sooner or later.

So there are a couple "OC's".
Because there's only one canon Ragnar and he was allied with the bad guys.
Good to know.

There are a lot of words that need replacing and correcting.
But from that, great chapter.

Now this one I'm stumped on.
Who's Cap in this? It can't be neither of the twins, that'd way too weird.
We've got Hiccup, Astrid, Snotlout, Fishlegs, Heather, and Eret.

Great character role choices!

Interesting take so far...

I was hesitant at first but this is really good.
I love the secret idendity with Hiccup, it makes so much sense with him. Not so much with Toothless being a humanoid ai system instead of maybe a genetically changed therapy animal.
Everything else though? Awesome.

me and my dad used to watch the show all the time lol

RIP STAN

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I like it! There are some grammar and spelling errors though, I suggest using Grammarly it is an excellent and free spell and grammar check software. They have an app on the app store as well as an online website. It would really help the flow of your story

liked the story very much , waiting for the next one from the series