I like the story so far with the different personal view points but one crit and I guess you know what that will be. Too short.

I like the idea with the multiple points of view, this way we can see everything through the eyes of many characters:)

Oh nice, bringing Ares into the mix makes it all even more intriguing...and Dahak too...Can't wait to see what is going to happen next:)

It sounds interesting your story, but it is extremely short. Have you considered writing longer chapters- as in 1000 words each chapter? :)