Will you return? It is an excellent story

I hate that I ever started reading this story because I LOVE it. I know you haven't updated this in years but if you're reading this review, PLEASE, update this story!

Omg, that is so great. The book is sooo good. Feel like it would be a waste to leave it unfinished. No kidding, is one of the best books I've come across, so if anyone ever tells you that your writting sucks, tell them to go screw themselves lol. I don't even know what makes it so good, I just know that I love it. Oh, and thanks for replying

Will you update the book eventually?

I’m totally with Ash on this one. The trio was being so selfish and unfair. Kind of in a ridiculous way. But anyway I hope you continue this story, I was really looking forward to seeing how ash and misty would reunite... hopefully you didn’t abandon this.

OH MY GOD I JUST GASPED AND LITERALLY DROPPED THE OWN FOOD I WAS HOLDING HOLY CRAP ASH AHHHHHHHHHH YOU ARE SUCH A GOOD WRITER

Oh my god I gasped out loud when they showed the note. Ahhhhhhhhhhhh

I can’t wait to find out what happened to misty and really can’t wait for ash to come to the rescue :) I also have to say you’re a fantastic writer and I love love how you described Officer Jenny as a “bluenette!” That is so clever! Thank you, also, for bringing back Brock! ;)

I know that Team Rocket isn't exactly some super-powerful, threatening organization, but let's just pretend, m'kay? Try and forget all of the pathetic things, and picture when they controlled Mewtwo or captured Lugia...before their epic fail, of course. It's fanfiction; imagination is key~!

Um...actually they are. As someone who has done hard- core research on everything Pokemon. From its mythological backgrounds, the hints in the games, and interviews with its creator(just reading a copy of them online) theres quite a bit you don't know. I'm just waiting for a few more of my predictions and ideas to happen. Some have, others failed, others are yet to be.

kalosshipping is liarreshipping and geekchic is um geekchic
so I ship...KALOS because the manga counterpart (X x Y/Liarreshipping) is my OTP ship for XY

Please please continue the story I really really want to know what will happen next will ash and friends find out about lance involvement will misty be saved or will she rescue herself since she is that awesome and what did Gary mean when he said he need exactly what ash felt because he is not the only one oh I love may's personality and character in the fanfic go may you show Serena ha ha ha thanks for this awesome fanfic I hope there will be updates soon anxiously awaiting them and I am following this story so hopefully I will get a notification of a update soon

did u edit? this feels different...

LOVE IT! Great story over all and hope you continue to update. Keep up the great work

Please update there are people who are counting on you. Theres so many smiles and hopes seeing this story has brought people. You can't let them down. It has always been so hard to find a story like this. Most of Fanfiction are filled with Highschool Romance Fics. I do hope you decide to update sooner or later. Please and Thankyou.

maybe Ash is acting quite antagonistic towards the company, but I dont blame him in certain situation. Looking forward for the next update